Reviews for Light in the Darkness Part 1
gold crown dragon chapter 6 . 4/29/2016
pt2 man
Hunter Hagen chapter 2 . 6/22/2015
I love the brutality. The length... I'm not whining and you make the stories how you please, but the only way these could be any better in my opinion is if they were longer (not that they need to be) I like how you described the force lightning. Haven't seen much description of the variety even though that is a thing.
Hunter Hagen chapter 1 . 6/22/2015
Me again, I don't know if you can tell what chapter This review is for so I'll tell you it's for page one again. I just wanted to say one last thing... I really like his name and the costume you described. Both seem perfect for the Star Wars universe... Pretty much all of this seems like it could snuggly fit into the Star Wars universe.
Hunter Hagen chapter 1 . 6/22/2015
Wonderful wording, dramatic dialogue, and creative scene. I like the reaper take. I love the brutal setting of the scene. I really like where this series could go.
one.who.reads chapter 6 . 3/24/2015
Interesting. An alternate star wars universe where sadoniss fills the roll of Darth Vader and this Lucius character replaces emperor Palpatine.
StormingIsraphel chapter 2 . 2/18/2015
Technically you have it wrong, Decapitated is when someones head is cut off, if an arm or leg is cut off then you would use sever/severed, although, sever(ed) could also be used in place of decapitated, for example; 'Mace Windu severed Jango's head with a swing of his purple lightsaber'
The Master chapter 5 . 3/10/2014
This was a good story, until this chapter. You really had to give him so many powers? Can you say overkill? Overpowered? Seriously? "Can't be killed?" Wish-fulfilment at its finest right here. I couldnt even finish this chapter. And did you review your own story? Fucking lame dude.
Ophelia'song chapter 6 . 3/11/2014
This was a really good chapter. I like Saddoness's jealously that Raven could be charmed by Malchior. You captured her heart break very well. This episode is really what made me fall in love with her because she like me could get lost in lies and be taken advantage and it showed she was human. And it turned out Saddoness isn't as evil as he thought he was lol Great work.
Ophelia'song chapter 4 . 3/10/2014
Aww that chapter was sweet lol. Seeing a softer side to Saddoness was nice. It was also nice to see Raven find comfort in some because in a way they are both lonely and I hope Saddoness realizes that.
Son of Helios chapter 5 . 3/10/2014
and just like that, you lost me. he's a super powered (also over-powered to begin with) sith. you just had to add a shit ton of extra powers? was that really necessary? this sounds to me more like a wish-fulfillment, self-insert story. can you say over-powered much? you started out with a really good idea going, but you just killed it.
Ophelia'song chapter 3 . 3/6/2014
youAwsome first 3 chapters! I have to say that you have a nature ability to weave words together, with time and practice you will see great improvement. I find most new authors have a hard time with fluidity and detail but it's clear those things come naturally to you. One thing I did notice though is at times you fall between the past and present tense which is not uncommon. I myself even struggle with do just keep that in mind when you write. I like suspense this story has and I can't wait to see more of it. Keep up the good work :-)
Cf96 chapter 7 . 12/29/2013
Just found this I like it so far
Princess Unikitty chapter 5 . 9/12/2013
hmm. very interesting development.
coldblue chapter 4 . 9/10/2013
Another great chapter.

They finally meet.

I hope Darth Sadoness remembers soon, BUT can't harm Raven for his personal feelings. It great drama.

Keep up the good work.
coldblue chapter 3 . 9/6/2013
Another great chapter.

I wonder how Darth Sadoness will deal with the Titians, Raven, and Malchoir. In order: unknown, slight attraction towards each other and Dark Side v.s. Evil Magic.

I'm going to guess that Dark Sadoness performed some Dark Sith Alchemy on his body and spells to enhance his body WAAY past the normal Human capability and enhance his Force capabilities.

Keep up the good work.
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