Reviews for Enslaved |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Tama Saga even if they have it they don't know how since it's a Vietnam war era bazooka |
![]() ![]() ![]() lewammi Well, to be fair for Saito, she did order him to leave |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fic and chapter! Regarding how familiar seals work... wow! Is that part of canon or is it expanded for this fanfic? If it was canon, then Saito WAS suffering from Stockholm Syndrome caused by a magical brainwashing slave seal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, man. Reading this first chapter was frustrating. Mostly because I would act differently and seeing him cower around was kind of ticking me off. Now I just feel like an idiot for growling at my phone screen lol. His behavior is understandable. Being thrust so suddenly into such a situation would be jarring. Still no less frustrating though… like man grow a spine, fuck. Stop letting them fucking walk all over you, it’s pathetic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i didn't get to far into the anime so idk if bird people were ever animated or drawn, so I'm just imagining them as the Rito from Zelda |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story. hope you come back to it one day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story got way better quickly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Boring. You write well and the realism is nice to observe. But… watching an average high school kid panic his way across the world doesn’t do it for me. Still kudos to you for sharing |
![]() ![]() I hope you continue this one day it’s really good! I love how you approach the ruins and louise nothing against her well maybe a little with the whole way she basically has no respect for human beings that are a lower status then her at first but it’s understandable with the society she grew up in and I like how it is now with how they are even though he should stay away so he can keep his free will. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice story. I like the way the story has taken the more murture route and did not keep all the naivety that most animes have. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda sucks this is the last chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude, hope you come back to this. i know its been nearly 6 years now, but it's just that good |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s been 6 years I guess there’s no hope for the story to continue ,but this was a great read. The anime and the light novels speak and show of the fear nobles put into the hearts of commoners but this took it to another level. The story was also very well written and to my knowledge had no glaring plot holes. This story has soooo much potential ah i hope that this gets to you and you decide to continue... |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is truly sad that this story will probably never be updated again, not to mention finished. It truly is excellent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() see my problem with the cannon story isn't the 'for the lulz' its the fact that Saito is a fucking doormat, and that hasn't really changed here he is calmly taking all their shit yeah I get the first chapter as in holy shit craziness new world and all that, but after the initial shock have some reaction don't just sit there like a fucking lemming |