Reviews for The Boy in the Team |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Not usually a fan of OCs but this story -its characters, development, plot, etc - was excellent! 10/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yk I didn't have high hopes when I first clicked on this fic but I'm SO glad that I did! Seeing Shinku's development and the interactions between Team 7 was absolutely lovely. Most of the fic really stressed me out but it never took me out of the story...all in all, a phenomenal read. Thanks for writing this! |
![]() ![]() This story was so good! There are sad parts, happy parts, and parts that are hilarious. My personal favorite was the beginning of Shinku talking to himself. Like the leeches, so comedic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hitting us with a 5 year time skip is straight up nefarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reread this fic for fifth time this years alone, thanks for finishing it. Hopefully you will have some time to write more about Shinku's and Naru's relationship, this fic actually made me search up femNaru fics lol, it's way to hood. Loved the fact that you kept Shinku as human as possible. And relationship between characters was great as well, kinda feel disappointed that I don't know what happened to Kakashi, end part of story seems to be way too short, like you were trying to finish it as fast as possible. Also, what is your plans with this world? Will you write about "Boruto" time ? Want to see how Sasuke's kids will behave, will Naru actually try to get her and Sasuke's kids merry? That would be funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Made this account to write this review for my favorite fanfiction ever |
![]() ![]() ![]() DUMBASS, Oh yeah, join the same guy who tried to have you killed and stopped all the messages with your team. |
![]() ![]() ![]() FUCK, did it really have to come back |
![]() ![]() ![]() FUCK YOU FOR LYING TO US NOOO |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME WORRIED ALL THIS TIME YOU EVIL EVIL MAN |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man sasuke is so nice here, it really fucks with you but I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHY THE FUCK DO I LIKE SASUKE MORE THAN NARUKO? WHAT? this is really fucking with me |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is probably the most pathetic OC I've ever seen. I need to wash my eyes every time I read this, but I keep reading it, I don't even know why |
![]() ![]() ![]() one of the greatest fics ive read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, what a read. Exellent read. Funny thing, I hated Kakashi towards the beginning of the fic, but now that he is actually gone, it's his death that made me feel the most empty inside lol. |