Reviews for The Boy in the Team
The Dude Himself chapter 83 . 3/18
Not usually a fan of OCs but this story -its characters, development, plot, etc - was excellent! 10/10
SSSRHA chapter 83 . 12/19/2024
Yk I didn't have high hopes when I first clicked on this fic but I'm SO glad that I did! Seeing Shinku's development and the interactions between Team 7 was absolutely lovely. Most of the fic really stressed me out but it never took me out of the story...all in all, a phenomenal read. Thanks for writing this!
Guest chapter 83 . 9/24/2024
This story was so good! There are sad parts, happy parts, and parts that are hilarious. My personal favorite was the beginning of Shinku talking to himself. Like the leeches, so comedic.
KinglyWisdom chapter 50 . 7/25/2024
Hitting us with a 5 year time skip is straight up nefarious.
tomoe latsu chapter 83 . 6/26/2024
Reread this fic for fifth time this years alone, thanks for finishing it.

Hopefully you will have some time to write more about Shinku's and Naru's relationship, this fic actually made me search up femNaru fics lol, it's way to hood. Loved the fact that you kept Shinku as human as possible. And relationship between characters was great as well, kinda feel disappointed that I don't know what happened to Kakashi, end part of story seems to be way too short, like you were trying to finish it as fast as possible.

Also, what is your plans with this world? Will you write about "Boruto" time ?

Want to see how Sasuke's kids will behave, will Naru actually try to get her and Sasuke's kids merry? That would be funny.
Inexplicable-reader chapter 1 . 6/16/2024
Made this account to write this review for my favorite fanfiction ever
LezarioFanficio chapter 77 . 5/30/2024
DUMBASS, Oh yeah, join the same guy who tried to have you killed and stopped all the messages with your team.
LezarioFanficio chapter 74 . 5/27/2024
FUCK, did it really have to come back
LezarioFanficio chapter 56 . 5/25/2024
FUCK YOU FOR LYING TO US NOOO
LezarioFanficio chapter 55 . 5/25/2024
HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME WORRIED ALL THIS TIME YOU EVIL EVIL MAN
LezarioFanficio chapter 34 . 5/24/2024
Man sasuke is so nice here, it really fucks with you but I like it
LezarioFanficio chapter 7 . 5/22/2024
WHY THE FUCK DO I LIKE SASUKE MORE THAN NARUKO? WHAT? this is really fucking with me
Peperoninja chapter 42 . 2/10/2024
This is probably the most pathetic OC I've ever seen. I need to wash my eyes every time I read this, but I keep reading it, I don't even know why
nifahs chapter 1 . 12/20/2023
one of the greatest fics ive read.
nifahs chapter 83 . 12/20/2023
Damn, what a read. Exellent read. Funny thing, I hated Kakashi towards the beginning of the fic, but now that he is actually gone, it's his death that made me feel the most empty inside lol.
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