I swear hes gone to the brink of seeing the light so much hes talking to himself and replying aswell my guy needs to see a yamanaka doctor

Alright everyone is a goddamn sadist kakashi must get a hard on making the mc’s life difficult bringing him close to death so goddamn much

Its already been 14 chapters and i didnt even notice it and that isnt a good thing these chapters went by so uselessly nothing happened even this was useless unless things start moving the fanfic will be done before anything of importance occurs

You did shinku dirty in the first few chapters he is trash

This chapter’s “author’s note” gave me homelander vibes.

Bro kakashi is a super bastard lol

Im actuay so excited to reread this for the 5th-no like 7th time. One of my favorite stories ever, incredible.

Why didn't he get it first try? In cannon naruto and Sasuke took all night while Sakura did it first try due to chakra control from her low capacity. Hmph.

I keep forgetting why I loved this fic so much, and this is just one of those many reasons. It's gritty, brutal, and realistic to the point that it's anime, but grimdark, all while keeping a tone of innocence.

the evangelion references are crazy

It's official you need serious help. I don't know what you do nowadays but you are either dead or in a prison or asylum.

I was a fan of your works at one point but after reading this I can definitely say you are not right in the head. It takes a psychopath to write such a messed up story.

36 chapters in and he is still a loser where the hell is character development? Not even chunin exams action is few and far between for a naruto fic. He knows he is weak but doesn't even strive to improve. I am tired frankly reading this is very boring by now. Nothing to hold my interest no smut, no action and substandard comedy. I am skipping chapters by now the pacing is terrible.

11chapters in I like the way the plot is going but too slow for my tastes. Also canon Sakura was weak compared to end game Sasu and Naru hope that's not the same here.

I'm sorry, I just have to say it. One of the most enjoyable things in this story (and there are quite a lot) is see Zabuza just overestimate Shinku and be surprised by the things Shinku pulls just by being ordinary, it almost sounds like he's a Fanboy. Hahahahahaha freaking Zabuza, the Demon of the Mist. This is such a joy!