|Reviews for The Boy in the Team|
| Jack oh lantern chapter 36 . 5/16
I am on chapter 36 and I just wanted to say that this fanfic is making me hate Kakashi something fierce for being such a shitty person. The main reason why is because it is showing him as a asshole in such a realistic light
| just a reader chapter 83 . 5/12
This story isn't perfect by any means- but it's still a damn good one. If you'd like to read any story, this is one of the best places to do so. Thanks for taking all of us on the ride, Shadenight.
| Chikeninacoop chapter 54 . 4/8
it's 12 am on a school night. I didn't do any of my homework. and I read 54 chapters in 1 day.
I think this is unhealthy
| FreeJSJJ chapter 83 . 1/15
Great story mate!
The only thing I find troubling is that Naruto "liking" Shinku came out of nowhere to me.
One moment she is egging on Hanabi and then ,bam she is asking/telling him to be her boyfriend.
Neverthless this is one of the best Naruto Fanfics I have read, in fact this one of the best fangics I have read !
Thanks for sharing your wonderful story with us!
| apocs chapter 83 . 12/24/2017
| Guest chapter 78 . 11/15/2017
i hate how naruko is just always there for every little problem or even no problem at all and they hold a long drawn out philosophical discussion all the time again and again, besides that it's pretty good
| Purplebeian chapter 60 . 11/9/2017
Not Zabuza then, Chojuro.
| Purplebeian chapter 58 . 11/9/2017
| Purplebeian chapter 56 . 11/9/2017
No, Fu! I wanted more ShinFu action...
| Purplebeian chapter 51 . 11/9/2017
Well, then. Somebody is fucking up Shinku's life.
| Purplebeian chapter 50 . 11/9/2017
| Purplebeian chapter 45 . 11/8/2017
Shinku is so badass when the situation calls for it.
| Purplebeian chapter 34 . 11/8/2017
Ohmigawd, I love this new development. Shinku is probably one of the best Sakura replacements ever.
| Kakatoes chapter 56 . 10/26/2017
FUCK YOU FUCK YOU I HATE YOU! YOU MONSTER
Seriously you got me, I thought Fu joined Akatsuki after thinking shinku died even if it led to her own death in the end because of bugkaze bugs and imagined the dragon wasn't deidara but a giant bug.
Especially as I semi spoiled myself by reading the chap titles accidentally especially the last one. I really thought Hanabi would end with Sasuke (which might still be the case).
Anyway well played, you made me feel really bad, which shows that I care for your characters. This chapter makes this story one of my all-time favorites. Honest.
They were so cute together though. It's a shame. I love your Fu.
However what REALLY surprised me is to learn that you go blind while writing your story. I have several failed attempts molding in my files and each and every time I didn't start writing until I had the end/major axes decided before hand. I don't know how you can work like that. To each is own I guess. And yours must work better than mine as I deleted all the stories I started for not being satisfied enough with them.
Thanks for the hard work,
| Kakatoes chapter 44 . 10/26/2017
Really loving the character development with Sasuke. And all around really. Yugao is hilarious.