Reviews for The Boy in the Team
Theif Lupin chapter 23 . 7/30
I swear hes gone to the brink of seeing the light so much hes talking to himself and replying aswell my guy needs to see a yamanaka doctor
Theif Lupin chapter 22 . 7/30
Alright everyone is a goddamn sadist kakashi must get a hard on making the mc’s life difficult bringing him close to death so goddamn much
Theif Lupin chapter 14 . 7/30
Its already been 14 chapters and i didnt even notice it and that isnt a good thing these chapters went by so uselessly nothing happened even this was useless unless things start moving the fanfic will be done before anything of importance occurs
Guest chapter 7 . 7/22
You did shinku dirty in the first few chapters he is trash
Berthfalls chapter 47 . 7/19
This chapter’s “author’s note” gave me homelander vibes.
giovvaniauditore chapter 34 . 4/23
Bro kakashi is a super bastard lol
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30
Im actuay so excited to reread this for the 5th-no like 7th time. One of my favorite stories ever, incredible.
danielkid50 chapter 12 . 1/6
Why didn't he get it first try? In cannon naruto and Sasuke took all night while Sakura did it first try due to chakra control from her low capacity. Hmph.
Superjukes chapter 34 . 11/2/2022
I keep forgetting why I loved this fic so much, and this is just one of those many reasons. It's gritty, brutal, and realistic to the point that it's anime, but grimdark, all while keeping a tone of innocence.
mebious chapter 73 . 9/13/2022
the evangelion references are crazy
Guest chapter 47 . 7/30/2022
It's official you need serious help. I don't know what you do nowadays but you are either dead or in a prison or asylum.
Guest chapter 45 . 7/30/2022
I was a fan of your works at one point but after reading this I can definitely say you are not right in the head. It takes a psychopath to write such a messed up story.
Guest chapter 36 . 7/30/2022
36 chapters in and he is still a loser where the hell is character development? Not even chunin exams action is few and far between for a naruto fic. He knows he is weak but doesn't even strive to improve. I am tired frankly reading this is very boring by now. Nothing to hold my interest no smut, no action and substandard comedy. I am skipping chapters by now the pacing is terrible.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/30/2022
11chapters in I like the way the plot is going but too slow for my tastes. Also canon Sakura was weak compared to end game Sasu and Naru hope that's not the same here.
some.random.lad chapter 42 . 7/30/2022
I'm sorry, I just have to say it. One of the most enjoyable things in this story (and there are quite a lot) is see Zabuza just overestimate Shinku and be surprised by the things Shinku pulls just by being ordinary, it almost sounds like he's a Fanboy. Hahahahahaha freaking Zabuza, the Demon of the Mist. This is such a joy!
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