Reviews for The Boy in the Team |
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![]() ![]() I love your banters, and i would read all of your stories |
![]() ![]() Pass? |
![]() ![]() This needs more love |
![]() ![]() ![]() high key want a side piece of Shinkus time on ANBU |
![]() ![]() Why did you have to make a pairing |
![]() ![]() ![]() this bold is coming out more and more and I don't know how I feel about this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I may not say a lot of words in this review but I truly love this story and if another review is to make another person read then gladly try it out because I may only be 1/4 in but it was awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say, with all the angst and violence in this story, the manga-typical comedic violence really doesn't work for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's quite funny how one's point of view completely changes people. Normally you'd think of Naruko as a good person for wanting to save everyone. However, from the point of view of a normal genin or chuunin, people like Shinku, Naruko is actually worse than Gato. Sure, Gato is cruel and kills anyone who stands against him, but Naruko is completely ready to cause the death of thousands of uninvolved people and force a whole generation of low skill chuunin, like Shinku would be if he had his way, into a war they don't want, just because she wants to change something she doesn't like. Naruko probably doesn't even understand what she is doing, like a kid trampling on an ant hill, just that the ants are people like Shinku. |
![]() ![]() This is the best fanriction I have ever read and I am so in love right now, you have no idea. It made me shocked, laugh, be worried out of my mind, kept me up late into the night and I regret none of it. Thank you, please keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NaruKO is a girl, yet still talks like NaruTO, including that irritating verbal tick that should be changed for a girl to 'ttebaNE. The premise of the story was offputting. The first half page was enough for me to stop. The author's note for chapter 1, glaring at me as I write this, strongly validates my choice to drop it early. The cringe is strong! |
![]() ![]() What the fuck? This chapter had bullshit written all over it. Possibly one of the worst Konoha Crush Arcs I have ever seen. |
![]() ![]() Again, nothing. He apparently doesn't fear death, yet he still stutters like Hinata on steroids because someone slammed a fucking pencil on his desk. |
![]() ![]() Again. Nothing. |
![]() ![]() Again, the same thing over and over again. And again, he doesn't learn anything |