Reviews for The Boy in the Team
Guest chapter 21 . 5/14/2020
I love your banters, and i would read all of your stories
Guest chapter 20 . 5/14/2020
Pass?
Guest chapter 15 . 5/14/2020
This needs more love
gogo bananas chapter 83 . 5/9/2020
high key want a side piece of Shinkus time on ANBU
Guest chapter 72 . 4/8/2020
Why did you have to make a pairing
Tiara13 chapter 37 . 4/1/2020
this bold is coming out more and more and I don't know how I feel about this
Tiara13 chapter 22 . 3/31/2020
I may not say a lot of words in this review but I truly love this story and if another review is to make another person read then gladly try it out because I may only be 1/4 in but it was awesome
Veraq chapter 35 . 2/3/2020
I have to say, with all the angst and violence in this story, the manga-typical comedic violence really doesn't work for me.
Veraq chapter 34 . 2/3/2020
It's quite funny how one's point of view completely changes people. Normally you'd think of Naruko as a good person for wanting to save everyone.
However, from the point of view of a normal genin or chuunin, people like Shinku, Naruko is actually worse than Gato. Sure, Gato is cruel and kills anyone who stands against him, but Naruko is completely ready to cause the death of thousands of uninvolved people and force a whole generation of low skill chuunin, like Shinku would be if he had his way, into a war they don't want, just because she wants to change something she doesn't like.
Naruko probably doesn't even understand what she is doing, like a kid trampling on an ant hill, just that the ants are people like Shinku.
Saintro chapter 83 . 1/3/2020
This is the best fanriction I have ever read and I am so in love right now, you have no idea. It made me shocked, laugh, be worried out of my mind, kept me up late into the night and I regret none of it. Thank you, please keep writing.
Simianpower chapter 1 . 11/12/2019
NaruKO is a girl, yet still talks like NaruTO, including that irritating verbal tick that should be changed for a girl to 'ttebaNE.

The premise of the story was offputting. The first half page was enough for me to stop. The author's note for chapter 1, glaring at me as I write this, strongly validates my choice to drop it early. The cringe is strong!
Guest chapter 46 . 9/6/2019
What the fuck? This chapter had bullshit written all over it. Possibly one of the worst Konoha Crush Arcs I have ever seen.
Guest chapter 40 . 9/6/2019
Again, nothing. He apparently doesn't fear death, yet he still stutters like Hinata on steroids because someone slammed a fucking pencil on his desk.
Guest chapter 39 . 9/6/2019
Again. Nothing.
Guest chapter 38 . 9/6/2019
Again, the same thing over and over again. And again, he doesn't learn anything
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