Reviews for The Boy in the Team |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely Beautifull story, somehow when er I read one of your stories I can't help but praise fanfiction since there are stories like yours that blow the original out of the water |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually cried reading this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn I knew it! Epic chapter! Very nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, very nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice twist on the invasion |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn I knew things were going to look bleak after he got a girlfriend but do you have to announce. It! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! A SHIP IS SAILING! (though I expect her to die within a few chapters but still, nice romance) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's no need for akatsuki in Canon obito Was more than capable of collecting all jinchuriki by himself before Canon ever began... Kami is handy like that... But glad that you confirmed obito ACTUALLY being dead I was still unsure |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome, and epicly dark |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice story so far |