Reviews for The Two Proposals
nanciellen chapter 1 . 3/8
Like this story. Edmund all the way. Thank you.
Riku Yamamoto chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Edmund!
QOP chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
Good heavens, what a tough choice! I wouldn't want to be in Mary's shoes
Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Its a great story so far. Since there are so little fanfics about Marry, I particularly liked yours. I would love to know what she decides and who she chooses ultimately. Please update! :D
Saralee chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
I liked this, even though you ended without knowing Mary's choice. I liked them both but Edmund would be my choice.
Barki chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
I really like the idea behind this story and I wish that you would continue.
The romantic in me says to chose James.
Mary, however, is not really romantic, is she?
Even if she feels more passion for James, I find it unacxeptable that he did not even write to her throughout all those months. Makes me wonder, what considerations stopped him from pursuing her before. Maybe his feelings for her are not so great after all?
I believe she could be happy with Edmund and I would not like to see her struggle financially for the rest of her life.
Panther Eyes chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
that was extremely unfair to end a story like that. you naughty girl!

ps: I thought your Mary was very close Jane Austin's.
skye3197 chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Is there any chance this could be a two shot? I like this idea soooo much and I wonder what would happen when they both came! Haha
can't think chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
I like James more. lol

this is a one-shot? I think you could continue it. lol
Avanell chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Great story for Mary...and kind of glad you left her questioning heart! I like them both! Although... ;)
Panther Eyes chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
you naughty girl! leaving us all hanging like. are you even going to do a sequel? the public has the right to know even if we draw up are conclusions. who would you have Mary choose?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
This would make a great story if you chose to expand it, using what you already have to develop the plot. Don't stop here, write on!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Ooooh, very interesting. Wondering why James didn't write sooner. She should go with him, he has a job and surely Darcy and Bingley could give them a little extra money
Pam chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
James sounds way too much like Willoughby. She should marry Edmund and they should develop a great passionate love for each other.
KimberlyTee chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
I would love to know whom she chose, however I did enjoy your story very much as is. Thank you very much for sharing it with us!
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