Reviews for In the Family
semora chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
I loved this first chapter. This promises to be a really interesting story. I like the premise of the Holmes' being a mafia family. I'm sure Mycroft will still be powerful and pulling strings somewhere (maybe even still in his government position - which would have intriguing possibilities). But I wonder what occupation Sherlock will have. Not sure working for the police is a fit in mafia families. But who knows, maybe the police are under their thumb and Sherlock works with them because of that.

I can't wait to read more. The writing was really good and I'm excited for this story. Definitely going on the watchlist.
My Thyla My Captain chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
I adore this concept! Please continue; looks like its going to be a great one!
Rose1999 chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
i like it!