I love that you included such an accurate portrayal of the release massage can bring. I'm a massage therapist and this really does happen frequently. This is exactly how I would have responded to her tears. Good job!

i love this story.

Lmao your Christian is a nut job. He’s controlling and so u healthy. It’s disgusting. Desparate and pathetic bitches think his behavior is attractive.

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The Hand Poem was in Lillian121. After the Boathouse Proposal...Gramps recited this poem in that shades story which was my favorite. I love this story also. You are a fantastic writer Mrs. Fraser. Loved this Christian and Ana!

Jamie does have sexy as sin feet in the movies. Loved his feet!

Ray or Taylor's contacts beat the shit out of Hyde in Prison...told the inmates he was a rapist child molestler...the most hated people in prison because other inmates think of their own mothers and/or sisters being raped and or molested by someone likek Hyde...A sadist..

tHESE TWO ARE TOO MUCH ...CRACK ME UP!

Lillian121 yes yes yes...her three fanfiction books are THE VERY BEST OF THE BEST...I LOVE THIS STORY OF YOURS AND YOU A FANTASTIC WRITER, BUT LILLIAN121 After the BoatHouse Proposal about the wedding and Ana and Christian Having a Baby are soooooooooo wonderful...so heartfelt, funny and heartbreaking all at once...I absolutely loved Christian and Elliots relationship in those two stories and the Gramps and Grams the dogs ..the birth of the four kids...the growth of Christian Grey as a man were sooooooo wonderful I laughed, cried no bawled when Gramps died...Swooned at Christian and Ana's wedding and their 25th anniversary ...ANOTHER FIFTY SHADES FANFICTION that is wonderful is Fifty Shades 10 YEARS LATER...WITH 7 KIDS...GREAT STORY...I HOPE THIS STORY PROVIDES AS MUCH GROWTH IN CHRISTIAN AS THOSE STORIES AND I REALLY HOPE THAT YOUR HAVE A REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY BAD ENDING FOR THE BITCH TROLL! AND ANA'S BITCH OF MOTHER CARLA...WHAT A BITCH...HER STEALING ANA'S DIAMOND EARRINGS THAT CHRISTIAN GAVE HER. AND HER HOOKING UP WITH THAT FUCKER MORTON!PUT MORTON AND JACK HYDE IN A PRISON DUNGEON TO KILL EACH OTHER...NO ADD THE BITCH TROLL ALONG WITH THE TWO ASSHOLES...GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR STORY...LOVE IT ...LOVE YOU!

Ana get your shit together ...You are insecure..go to your therapist more often..You are making Christian worse...you don't deserve him...Christian should take off somewhere aways from Ana to think thing through..Give Ana space to get her shit together..Christian tell your parents.. hire someone to put a bullet in Elena's head!

I think Ana is a jerk sometimes...she feeds into and causes Christian to be jealous...She totally disregards his issues with control...instead of talking to him and understanding how he became the way he is she flies off the handle... and defies him which makes his issues worse...I think they are not good for each other...I can see that she has a problem with the contract...by she has no concept of a BDSM really is ANA IS A BITCH - CHRISTIAN IS A PRICK SOMETIMES BOTH ARE FLAWED INDIVIDUALS ...I LOVED ANA IN THE E L JAMES BOOKS...I HATE ELENA THE BITCH TROLL IN THE BOOKS AND ALL OF FANFICTION STORIES...I KNOW THIS IS A SLOW AND STEADY STORY BUT HURRY UP A PUT A BULLET IN THE BITCH TROLLS BRAIN.

I've loved reading this story in one go and over a few weeks. Thanks for writing it to this point.

I know this story is very old, however I'm really enjoying binge reading it for the first time.

This is soooo good! Please come back :)

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