Reviews for Jaune Arc's Pain
Guest chapter 41 . 4/11
Please continue this story and please make it rose arc hell do triangle also great stuff please update/continue this story
Guest chapter 32 . 4/11
What about Ruby
NexusRider161 chapter 11 . 3/20
Jaune x Ruby. Please.
Advancer231 chapter 30 . 3/6
So far, the story is quite interesting. I like the way you wrote Jaune and how you can get the emotions just right, though I sometimes find it hard to follow your fight scenes. Your OCs are good, other than the fact that you blatantly ripped off Trevor Phillip's lines with Dante (though this is . So I can't really blame you.)
Gravenimage chapter 39 . 3/3
I thought you said you were making this a love triangle. But it looks like the story is just Jaune/Phyyra I want Ruby in it too.
gamerandartist35 chapter 21 . 2/24
this was a good chapter i give it a infinite out of ten because of dante his a very funny guy and i enjoy this chapter reading about him was soo funny lmao
Guest chapter 19 . 2/21
No, really, you gotta look back at your chapters and proofread them further...the small errors really build up and stand out. DX

You're story is still good though.

It's just missing the few things that'll make it really commendable. ;P
Guest chapter 18 . 2/21
LOL tfw Jaune can actually dance in canon. XD
Guest chapter 17 . 2/21
God DAMN IT. Stick to one perspective please! The random shift between 3rd Person & 1st Person sent me reeling, making it difficult for me to enjoy the story.. Dx
Guest chapter 10 . 2/21
So uh...Cardin isn't a jerk?
cindy.mack3 chapter 39 . 2/16
AWESOME story! Please update soon! I need to know that happens next...huge cliff hanger.
Marronmario chapter 21 . 2/13
Holy hell Dante is fucking insane. I love it!
nona chapter 17 . 2/10
Uh...who's perspective was this written in? I'm really lost.
warrof chapter 2 . 2/9
May I suggest some line spacing?
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5
This was terrible. Go fucking kill yourself for making this.
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