Seems like you wiped your association with the fandom, but I just read HL5 fanfic and wanted to tell you how much I liked it.

I just reread HL5 and this, and I think they’ve blown me away even more. I’m speechless. Thank you!

I didn't feel like logging in, but if you do decide to reply to me, this is my real username.
I liked the old story. I guess I don't like change.
Couldn't you have kept the original story on here? Is the new one very different from the original? It's been so long since I've read any fanfiction. I usually just come here to read my favorites now-a-days. I'll still be buying your book, though. It's good to see the good fanfiction writers do something with their stories.

XOXO CrystalJoyy

Is there full chapters from Samuels POV?

Hey there! Loved the fanfic version AND your books! I always said your beautiful story should be published, and NEEDED to be published, regardless of the stickler naysayers. What Sam and Kaye faced, their struggles and triumphs, could never be truly understood unless it's something one experienced in RL. However, we can all strive to learn more about something that can be so painful and powerful. I have a question, is anyone writing a fanfic of Hydraulic Level 5? Or a Twi/hydraulic crossover? Heheh, could be cool! ;)

Thank you, thank you for this lovely chapter. I just finished HL5 . I actually bought it some time ago when it was published. Since your Fan Fic version is one of my all time favorites I wasn't sure I would read it, but your writing is so genuine I had the sense that I at least wanted you to have my money ! I read some of the early reviews and knew I needed to read it. I'm so glad I did. I am, myself Latina (Chicana) and also a psychoanalyst specializing in the effects of loss and trauma. I love this character , and his family and community. You capture both the conflict and enduring effects of his (and Kaye's) young life as well the the kind of humorous exchanges unique to Mexican American friends. Each of the women in his life have their unique strengths. I'm so glad for these out takes , and eagerly await the next book. Dr. Twimomcat

I love these Sarah. Thank you sweet heart. They are a great gift to any old timey reader like myself. *hugs*

I bought the book, and I can't wait for the sequel. I really feel like you did a skillful job with the rewrite - much more so than any story that's been pulled to publish. :)

Ohhh! I loved the new version of HL5. I spent every spare minute over the weekend reading about Kaye & Sam. I'm very eager for more. When will Skygods be available?

I was so excited to see these outtakes. the characters got under my skin right away. Just as before, I couldn't stop thinking about them. I've purchased the kindle version and I'm so eager to begin (again) with these new characters. Congratulations!

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I didn't really think this could be better than the original but it is. Bravo! It sounds like you really up'd the level of this story and it should do really well. I wouldn't be surprised if a movie deal comes down the pike with this! It's so very good. Congratulations! And best wishes for super success!

I read HL5 as it was being posted as a FF - how I Iove the long chapters and the twists and turns and angst.

Now, a few years later, my sons are 19 and 15 - the oldest in second year of college. When he left for his first year - I gave him all the Mom warnings: excessive drinking, drugs, unprotected sex. He was thoroughly embarrassed. I didn't give a rat's ass.

But then, I told him about other things that can happen to young people. How their minds can become their worst enemies. You see- I will NEVER be as comfortable as you, dear Sarah, with mental illness. It terrifies me. I'm no longer young and whatever pretty I had has long faded. My body isn't hard anymore. But my mind - that is sharper than ever. It had better be... I care for two teens and my parents, who are completely dependent on me, both are 90.

If Kaye/Bella were my daughter I would have taken her to the ends of the earth to get away from Samuel/Edward. I would have lost my daughter, of course - she would choose to be with him despite all my warnings. I've never loved anyone enough to understand that sacrifice.

Love revisiting the characters you created - because you make me think!

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Congratulations on being published! I've just bought it for my Kindle and read the absolutely glowing reviews. Did seem a bit weird to see Sam and Kaye rather than Edward and Bella, but I'm sure I'll get used to it. :) Can Robert Pattinson still be my mental Sam? Can't wait to leave a glowing review of my own on Amazon. Again, it will seem weird to not review after every chapter, but on the upside I don't have to wait for updates! Congratulations again! As they say here in England, WELL DONE YOU!