|Reviews for Let's dance|
| kiiwii713 chapter 1 . 3/10
Wow, that was just SO hot
| NikkaHi chapter 1 . 2/27
| Anon chapter 1 . 2/23
i LOVE IT. EVERYTHING IS PERFECT
| PheonixShadow chapter 1 . 1/27
Love, love, love every moment when Marco finds the photos, and I can just imagine how beautiful Ace looks in them, and then finally Marco wakes up and goes for it. Just perfect.
| bloodytears87 chapter 1 . 1/14
omg i loved this! 3 i was skeptical about the naughty pictures at first but I'm glad I read it, this was just so much awesome especially for a first time writing this pairing. you did a great job, thank you for writing this.
| Yume Hime16 chapter 1 . 1/5
I seriously liked/love this story and I can't believe that it's your first time writing Marco/Ace and Izo was really fun (he did a great job with the photos) especially the photo that was sewn at Marco's boxers I never expected something like that.
P.S: I love this pairing
| gaarablack chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
this was so smexy! I could literally imagine Ace doing the pictures without knowing or caring what they would be for.
| VodkaThief chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
The only thing that would've been better for me, was that if you wrote about Izo's thoughts at the end XD
| coolchessplayer chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
girl I like cried at how good this was, someone needs to make fanart for these sexy poses
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Holy shit... Your way too good at writing this sort of thing.
You should try a bondage thing between this couple. That would be so fucking hot.
| Junk'peria chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
Oh. My. God. I almost fainted at the end of the story so much I had like my heart doing flip-flop... This kind of story is lovely, cute, smut and really beautiful at the same time. The descriptions are so great that the imagination can exactly picture what is happening. Each time Marco found a photo I was like "oh my, how is Ace on this one ? Quick, turn it !". I was there, thinking that the picture could be hidden there or there by Izo. That's so nice from him to help his companion. Really, I like Izo a lot because I already pictured him as a caring nakama. You proved it could be really like that.
From the beginning to the end, I could have feeld the rising of their feelings, the love of Marco and the painful waiting of Ace. I'd like to point this sentence, that loses my heart, when he wants to "touch Ace's freckles, trace the patterns on those cheeks with his fingers [...] but he knew the only thing under his fingers would be the cold surface of a photograph." This one, alone, is truly magnificient.
I wasn't really into Ace/Marco. They suit together because they're both on Shirohige's ship. That was what I was thinking BEFORE reading this fic. Now, I'm pretty sure of one thing : I watch Ace/Marco relationship with another eye. And second thing : at this point, this isn't only practive. This is a gift because the writing was at the top of all fanfics about love of this type, and so touching that it makes me smile and melt my heart.
| Ujvari chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
Man, I read this fanfiction ages ago and never left a review, because, well, you see... *dirty smirk* I got kinda busy every time I started writing my opinion.
The problem is, I dont even have much to say. It was perfect. Simple perfection. Theres nothing else. It was hot, had a well balanced pace and oh the teasing... I really liked the idea and the characters reactions. I wouldnt mind reading another 100 fanfictions from you XD
Please continue writing about this pairing. We need people like you!
Thats all. *leaves chocolate behind*
| Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
What did I just read.
So... First thing I read in the One Piece fandom, and I think that just changed my preferences forever. What just happened I don't even. *dies*
What an erotic story. I love stories like this. So many feel the need to rush, but... taking it slow is even hotter. Also, thank you for being able to write. Truthfully said, this was the second thing I read, but I stopped the first one about 2 sentences in because it looked like it was written by a grade schooler. And that just wasn't cool.
But anyways. I have to admit this is why I have a preference for mature stories. This was just so... wow. I don't even know what to say about it.
Thank you so much for writing. It was a pleasure to read.
| SoulMore chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
| Shaetil chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
I love this, dammit! 3
I knew I would... damn you for making me want that 'Running' sequel even more! And Izo...! I can't breathe from laughing so hard! Your Izo is amazing!
It's really nice to see how you developed the culture aboard the Moby Dick given the scant information in canon. You created a wonderful little family environment to violate with your dirty, dirty photo game! Again, I love you. :D