Reviews for Lyrical Days
KingSora3 chapter 4 . 11/24/2016
Nice one!
KingSora3 chapter 3 . 11/24/2016
Nice job!
KingSora3 chapter 2 . 11/24/2016
Cool!
KingSora3 chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
Love it!
Mernom chapter 5 . 8/18/2016
Very interesting.
ZE Bri-0n chapter 4 . 9/20/2015
Three things 1:someone really should have told Kiritsugu that Thaumaturgy degrades space magic, he could reinforce his bullets and 2: Can Kiritsugu recognize a Reality Marble? Cause it seems rather important to me. He's seen Rider's though. 3: how much prana can each of Shirou's Circuits channel? In cannon, each can channel 10 units, which is apparently very little. But that was after a life of disuse, they atrophied. These are his Circuits in their prime. Huh. Makes you wonder how different Archer would have been if Kiritsugu had opened his Circuits as a kid. He'd be a Hell of a lot stronger, add in whatever training he'd receive once he was actually competent... though would he not have invented Tracing? Or would he have invented it early, since he had more prana to practice with? On the matter, why did Kiritsugu never make Shirou's temporary Circuits permanent? Alchemy does things like that, and having permanent Circuits would be far safer than recreating them over and over and over again. It might have taken some research, but Kiritsugu was a competent magus, even if he combined his magecraft with modern technology and did little research. He knew what he was doing. My evidence? It took a Grail War to kill him. And it was five years after that that it actually finished him off.
ZE Bri-0n chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
Please tell me that this version of Kiritsugu is going to exercise basic logic and test the boy for Magic Circuits at some point... seriously,it is quite literally the first thing a magus is supposed to do before training an apprentice,and he never did it. Shirou has 27, 27 Magic Circuits to an average magus's 20. And they were still able to channel 10 units of prana after 10 years of atrophy. Translation: Shirou had the potential to be an above-average magus, for a first generation, anyway( no Crest). Of course, that was before he was implanted with Avalon, which overwrote both his Elemental Affinities and Origin with Sword, essentially crippling his general magecraft, but allowing for a level of master of specific mysteries that are nigh-unheard of in the modern era. Really makes you wonder though, just who was Shirou before the fire, to have so much potential, magically?
DanteNaru chapter 5 . 9/13/2015
cool
ARSLOTHES chapter 5 . 8/8/2015
looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it comes. This is a really good fic
Guardoflight chapter 5 . 4/19/2015
This has a pretty enjoyable fic and I hope to see more in the near future and what will happen to Shirou and how Kiritsugu will handle Chrono.
UDLLORD chapter 5 . 4/18/2015
man this is a good story that have not been updated for nearly 2 yrs hope you update this very good story soon.
Apex85 chapter 5 . 4/5/2015
Dammit, why are so many of the good Nanoha crossover fics like this abandoned so soon?
Grizzmon chapter 5 . 1/30/2015
is a shame this story has not updated in two years...
Grizzmon chapter 4 . 1/30/2015
Well, damn.
Grizzmon chapter 3 . 1/30/2015
Shiriou is a tad too idealistic, isn't he?
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