|Reviews for Darkrai's Journey|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
| FtDLulz chapter 4 . 9/29/2013
Lovin' the story so far!
| Lectro Underground chapter 3 . 9/16/2013
Good story so far!
But if you want lie breaks, just type in underscores for one line.
| grovyle the thief lover chapter 2 . 9/13/2013
good story for so far! I like the progress! But I personally don't think Celebi would trust him THIS easily! I think grovyle would! (he even trusted Dusknoir in the extra episode of PMD explorers of sky) but I think Celebi would be more cautious about him, because she's a legendary as well And probably heard of darkrai's bad reputation
| AsianVegetablesLLC chapter 2 . 9/12/2013
It's not bad, but everything seems to pass by too quickly...
| darrelodin chapter 2 . 9/12/2013
First off, it's very nice of you to try to get an update out.
Second, you probably shouldn't have. Reading this tiny chapter, I felt like you just threw it all together and didn't really go over it. The scenarios sound odd, the characters are a bit too trusting of each other for being in what effectively is a fallout. And the descriptions take me out of the narrative, not pull me in.
I want this to be an awesome story, but please rethink what you are writing and do some rough drafts if you seriously want to continue this.
| grovyle the thief lover chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
good story for so far! I would love too see the progress on this story!
don't worry about the spelling and grammer I think your doing great
Ciao from grovyle the thief lover
| darrelodin chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Hmm, seems to be an interesting start. Will definitely read more!