Reviews for Darkrai's Journey
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
Love it!
FtDLulz chapter 4 . 9/29/2013
Lovin' the story so far!
Lectro Underground chapter 3 . 9/16/2013
Good story so far!
But if you want lie breaks, just type in underscores for one line.
grovyle the thief lover chapter 2 . 9/13/2013
good story for so far! I like the progress! But I personally don't think Celebi would trust him THIS easily! I think grovyle would! (he even trusted Dusknoir in the extra episode of PMD explorers of sky) but I think Celebi would be more cautious about him, because she's a legendary as well And probably heard of darkrai's bad reputation
AsianVegetablesLLC chapter 2 . 9/12/2013
It's not bad, but everything seems to pass by too quickly...
darrelodin chapter 2 . 9/12/2013
First off, it's very nice of you to try to get an update out.

Second, you probably shouldn't have. Reading this tiny chapter, I felt like you just threw it all together and didn't really go over it. The scenarios sound odd, the characters are a bit too trusting of each other for being in what effectively is a fallout. And the descriptions take me out of the narrative, not pull me in.

I want this to be an awesome story, but please rethink what you are writing and do some rough drafts if you seriously want to continue this.
grovyle the thief lover chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
good story for so far! I would love too see the progress on this story!

don't worry about the spelling and grammer I think your doing great

Ciao from grovyle the thief lover
darrelodin chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Hmm, seems to be an interesting start. Will definitely read more!