...why did it take me this long to put two and two together about D.H.? I mean... you pretty much spelled it out. That said... well played.

Aww she’s channeling Dan that’s adorable

Wait up, minus the castration, isn't that how Rasputin was killed? Poisoned, shot three times, beat with clubs, beat with chains, and then drowned under the ice of a river?

Yes, this was so dramatic that I followed Dan and Chris' lead by making popcorn to properly enjoy this masterpiece. Helix's praise be upon you good author, for you have shown me the light.

Glad you posted this 'cause I was about to give up on this fic. I don't have a FimFiction account and have never seen the need to go on that site (this is actually the only MLP fic I've ever read and liked) so I thought you had just abandoned it. I'll go check it out.

I'm gonna take a guess and say that site is for fimfiction? for some reason the website name isn't there. I just thought you should know

I loved the action the romance the adventure he comedy the drama the small part of horror the detail you put in this master piece so I encourage you to continue this story for years to come I and other people who love the wheel and the butterfly want you to know that this is 1000000/10

That was funny lol. Doctor Victor von Doom treating Dan, Pinkie, Elise and Chris to a trip to the movies was a good way to end it. I would like to see an alternate ending to this chapter lol.

you know i really wish this site had a bookmark system in place, because as much as i luv this story there's just no way I can read it all in one sitting.

Sarge, you crazy badass you.

I keep overloading on this fan fiction,i overflow with joy,amusement,giddy bemusement,laughs ,giggle fits,and highs with lows that returns to highs. I have read this fan fic for three or more days now,I read the companion piece,its that good. I believe I ship dan and pinkie. you write in a enjoyable way,I wish I was half as creative and dedicated As you at writing. you are awesome, I can hardly wait to read more of the fan things go well for you.

Woah, best story I have read is this it or is there more

Hey man from 2016 like your story and if you make another one tell me OK

Totally hyper with laughter lol

can't...stop...laughing!