Reviews for Internal
kayleigh22012 chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
I liked this. I liked that it was not overly descriptive. the dialog flows for me. it feels natural. you have established a good premise. I would definitely love to read more! :)
Littlefeatherofhope chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Love this line "In their world of iron, there would always be blood, but she would still indulge is pleasantries and courtesies as if they were worth anything." Perfect characterization, can't wait for more . :D