|Reviews for The Gate Keeper|
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/15
Please continue the story
| Paxloria chapter 5 . 1/19
I really think you should try to continue this.
This story is pretty good & shouldn't be abandoned.
| Paxloria chapter 1 . 1/19
Wow! That was random!
Impressive, but still random. Right about now Harr must be wearing a "WTF" face.
| usagirokudo chapter 5 . 12/28/2013
I ALREADY LOVE THIS STORY.
| sdevil chapter 5 . 12/28/2013
| Lawrian chapter 5 . 12/15/2013
please continue! This fic is really interesting, it's a great idea.
| NitaIce chapter 5 . 11/17/2013
I love this! Very well done. Take all the time you need to get inspiration back. I, myself, am currently stuck on my three stories and am looking through others to get some form of muse back. It works in small bursts. maybe you could try that?
| neveryears chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
I'm honestly curious where that form of address (my lovelies) comes from. I see female writers (especially bloggers) use it frequently. From my perspective, if someone called me their lovely to my face I'd think they were being sweetly condescending, totally creepy, or they were the reincarnation of Dolores Umbridge.
Is it a cultural thing (I'm Canadian)? A generational thing? A gender thing? Or something you picked up on the internet? I must know.
| UniCryin chapter 5 . 11/7/2013
Omg I'm so looking forward to reading this story! :D Hope the next update comes soon! :)
| thebellimelli chapter 5 . 11/5/2013
Sounds really cool. I hope you write more :)
| god of all chapter 5 . 10/24/2013
Great chapter and story so far pleases. Continue this story soon.
| Furionknight chapter 5 . 10/18/2013
I look forward to more :)
| She-Who-Shall-Not-Be-Sane chapter 5 . 10/17/2013
I really love this story! But maybe could make the chapters longer?
| brynchilla chapter 5 . 10/14/2013
Oh no, your notes! I'm so sorry that that happened to you! But I think you're making the right decision. You should only write when you feel that your writing should flow, you should never force anything to be written.
I agree with you on this God just being a former shell of himself. In the beginning, he was so excited and full of life. Now he just sits there. What must have happened in order for him to loose, himself?
| No One Winks chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Why do fanfiction writers insist on everyone winking when they are being cheeky? It is a legitimate question. From my experiene, no one winks in real life unless they are flirting, being sarcastic, or trying to lett someone in on the joke, serreptitiously. Even then, no one winks in real life. It is an action only seen on television. It is fake, contrived, and annoying. If someone were to wink, I would automatically think that they had something in their eye not that they were trying to be charming, inclusive, mischievious, and condescending. You wink to children, you wink when you do a slide-of-hand magic trick and even then, no one winks. No one winks. No one winks. Show me a bonified person who routinely winks during their conversations with other people and I'll show you someone without any friends.
To laugh and wink is hard to do at the same time, which makes one think that the laugh wasn't a true laugh because when people laugh, they close or squint their eyes, they don't wink. Not even god winks, because his winking would be percieved as a sign into his ineffable plan and when was the last time that happened?
So winking doesn't happen unless it is some weird cultural behavior that is running wild throughout the United Kingdom, which I doubt.