|Reviews for That's Enough!|
| 1983Sarah chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
I love seeing Lily and her parents stand up for Severus. Neat to see what could have been or how things might have happened. Really thoughtful and heartfelt piece!
| PlatonicLovers chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
this is so beautiful i wish this actually happened :( but instead Severus had to die without love :(
| Fire The Canon chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
This was lovely. I always sit on the fence with Snily and Jily. Normally I'm quite a loyal shipper to one or another, but between those two... I either like them both or dislike them both - depends on what mood I'm in :P
Anyway, this was written quite well, and I really liked what you did with the Muggle!AU idea, and the situation you put them in. It still stayed true to their character, and you did a fantastic job at that.
Your actual writing style is quite nice, too. It has a lovely flow, and I found myself really hooked in it.
There were a few typos in there, but nothing major. The only think I really did notice was ["Mom? Dad?" Lily looks as flabbergasted as Severus.] Remember in England, Lily would use 'Mum'.
Other than that, great job. Well done!
| sjrodgers23 chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
sequel please love it so far. thank you
| Dancing-Souls chapter 1 . 9/7/2013