Reviews for Dawn's Sage
Maelaeran chapter 2 . 3/1
It would have been better to have spent more time developing Naruto's character. As it is, he feels like a prop being moved from one scene to the next with little rhyme or reason.
RaidenStrayX chapter 1 . 1/17
fuck u Naruto would never join Akatsuki
mistyagami chapter 27 . 12/26/2021
An oldie but a goodie.
Gacs chapter 9 . 11/27/2021
I'm pretty sure Reverse summoning wouldn't get you out of Kamui, so it would have made much more sense to have Tobi getting Naruto out of there, and having the Leaf ninjas thinking Naruto died.
Ricee chapter 27 . 11/4/2021
was a good fic overall, sage mode was somehow underpowered and overpowered with the ability to collect it while moving
Ricee chapter 9 . 11/4/2021
would have been pretty easy to say something like "Minato left his techniques in a book in the summoning realm, thinking that would be the only place safe from being stolen"
Ricee chapter 8 . 11/3/2021
survival? that's his reason? ah yes team up with the people who want to kill you (even if they don't know it) and kill people who could be considered family
Ricee chapter 2 . 11/3/2021
why the hell is deidara a chick? hope it's not some crappy romance. maybe the "I loved her and you killed her" type thing.
Amogo21 chapter 27 . 9/12/2021
Man. Third time rereading this and it’s still as good.
Golden Wind God chapter 27 . 9/1/2021
wow this is definitely in my top ten favorite stoies. great fic keep it up
renextronex chapter 27 . 8/25/2021
Honestly I'm not that happy with this fic, mostly because it mixes 2 things that I don't think it needed to. a fic of Akatsuki Naruto? I dig it. A fic about a Naruto raised by toads? I dig it. One that is the 2 things? ernn, not so much
Guest chapter 3 . 8/17/2021
Giving Sora to the Leaf was a smart way of giving them a jinjuriki without moving one of the others. It also means the Leaf has no reason to actively be looking for Kurama. Smart save
nurayong.nur chapter 2 . 7/31/2021
MaximusH2 chapter 1 . 6/20/2021
To me this story stayed pretty consistent and it really was enjoyable to read the epilogue felt rushed but other than that and a few meaningless deaths it was still amazing.
JadeDragon927 chapter 27 . 6/19/2021
This was a pretty good story, there was a lot going on, the fight scenes felt good and it wasn't always serious or goofy. Great detail and good flow with the story, kept me on my toes in some parts. Ending is interesting, slightly rushed in my opinion, but overall it was great.
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