Reviews for Dawn's Sage
VexOzzy chapter 27 . 5/16
Officially my favourite fanfic
maliqueporcher195 chapter 1 . 4/7
Amazing read I would even say it was perfect, only thing I would change is if there was a little bit more romance with Naruto and deidara but amazing read nonetheless keep it up man
Seriksays chapter 14 . 3/31
He really gave a parasite that controls ninja while leaving his super powered ninja friend with the most dubious man on the planet
Man chapter 25 . 3/20
Everything about Nagato turning into a megalomaniac with not a hint of regret is bullshit.
Moreover, Deidara standing a chance against Konan? Also bullshit.
Hell, them surviving is bullshit.

Naruto beating Nagato even with the full-Kyuubi would be impossible. A single TSO would gouge through Naruto entirely, but I guess you want plot armor no jutsu to be responsible for their survival.

Why did this betrayal even happen? You ruined the characters
Username6166 chapter 13 . 3/12
I love a fic that isn't afraid to kill off characters rather than make up dozens of plot-armor situations where the enemies always survive. It's a common thing in evil/dark Naruto fics that he always spares leaf nin in every single encounter for random convenient reasons, so this is really satisfying to read.
Username6166 chapter 3 . 3/12
Most of these negative reviews here don't belong on this site, they're complaining about Naruto not being like canon Naruto and not doing canon Naruto stuff. This is literally fanfiction, what the hell are you people going on about?
Username6166 chapter 2 . 3/12
Female Deidara is underrated
Hi chapter 27 . 1/2
What is the name of the sequel
Guest chapter 10 . 11/10/2022
10 chapters in and I still have no idea why Naruto wanted to join akatsuki, cause author said so seems to be the reason.
Guest chapter 27 . 11/10/2022
I enjoyed it a lot!
LacunaLuna chapter 27 . 9/28/2022
This was a great read!
Kalvorax chapter 27 . 9/26/2022
ok... this is one of the best Naruto joins Akatski stories I've read. Loved the twist at the end with Nagato.
LacunaLuna chapter 10 . 9/26/2022
Reference to the Kamehameha, didn't expect to that!
Videocrazy chapter 27 . 8/19/2022
This was very enjoyable! I feel like some of it felt a bit disjointed and would have been better with some pre-planning, but it was otherwise fine. If I have one complaint, it’s that the whole thing where Naruto was forced to capture Killer Bee for real felt incredibly contrived and rushed. I also wish we got to see Deidara in the epilogue. Still, it was unique and I liked it a lot!
Thundos chapter 1 . 8/4/2022
Not gonna lie there’s a little BS. There’s no way Jiraiya never figured it out in the 10-12 years Naruto has been with the toads.
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