Reviews for Dawn's Sage |
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GodLovesReading2 chapter 27 . 7/8 How this story isn't big I will never know it still holds up today has a good end, good plot twists and a plot that moves forward the gender change was not needed but it is still fine probably a forgotten plot point/relationship plan also, the guest below me is stupid and doesn't know what he's talking about since he didn't even read half the story lol doesn't know what's going to happen he's probably the type of person to read the first bit of Harry Potter and say "I don't want to just read a story of an abused child who is under the stairs" when it's actually about a school of magic |
Guest chapter 6 . 5/11 My problem with the story is that the MC is not working for himself. He has no goal. His whole existence is only to push the plot forward by being an Akatsuki flunky. Which is retarded because he is one of Akatsuki's targets. |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/11 It's very uninspired so far. Imagine Naruto. Then take away everything that makes him Naruto. And give him back only Sage Mode and being a dumbass. You will get this MC. The MC joined Akatsuki... because the author is emo bitch edgy retard. Pain literally just needed to say, 'I wanna peace!' and the MC jumped at the offer to join people who want to kill him. It's very stupid. And now the MC even feels bad and worries that his comrades in Akatsuki would find out about him being a jinchuuriki? Ugh. As I said, this is a work of retard. The premise is good. But the second the MC joined Akatsuki, it became just dumb. The funny thing is, I probably would not complain if the author clarified the MC joined because he wanted to get info on these people who want to kill him and maybe use Akatsuki to grow stronger. It would make sense since they do not know his status as jinchuuriki. Then again, it's still stupid because with Sharingan, Zetsu, and Pain, you'd think they would notice Kurama's chakra in Mc's chakra system. But apparently, they were dumbed down for the plot. |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/11 What an utterly retarded way to include the MC into Akatsuki. It only showed the author is an edgy idiot. |
metacllica chapter 27 . 5/7 Still a good read in 2024. |
AlastorEX616 chapter 1 . 4/28 This was great |
Venom1462 chapter 5 . 1/15 Ooh so Obito's dead huh? I wondered why they needed to fight Yagura if Obito had him in his control. What an interesting way to take care of things. |
Venom1462 chapter 4 . 1/14 I have seen many fics where another character takes on the personality of the original, which makes the story very uninteresting. I am glad Sora is only going to parallel canon Naruto in some ways. Also since there was no mention of Orochimaru I assume he is still a part of Akatsuki. |
KanjiK chapter 14 . 12/9/2023 How did the thousand years of death even sneak onto there? |
KanjiK chapter 5 . 12/8/2023 “Cool..update” being strangely motivational made me crack up. I love this story so much but the author notes are on a different level. |
TKOTKOKING chapter 27 . 11/13/2023 This story was so good I binged it in two nights. Thanks for the story. |
VexOzzy chapter 27 . 5/16/2023 Officially my favourite fanfic |
maliqueporcher195 chapter 1 . 4/7/2023 Amazing read I would even say it was perfect, only thing I would change is if there was a little bit more romance with Naruto and deidara but amazing read nonetheless keep it up man |
Seriksays chapter 14 . 3/31/2023 He really gave a parasite that controls ninja while leaving his super powered ninja friend with the most dubious man on the planet |
Man chapter 25 . 3/20/2023 Everything about Nagato turning into a megalomaniac with not a hint of regret is bullshit. Moreover, Deidara standing a chance against Konan? Also bullshit. Hell, them surviving is bullshit. Naruto beating Nagato even with the full-Kyuubi would be impossible. A single TSO would gouge through Naruto entirely, but I guess you want plot armor no jutsu to be responsible for their survival. Why did this betrayal even happen? You ruined the characters |