Well, a interesting ending... The villains win, for one, and Orochimaru survive... That is usually hard to see.

Too bad it ended just after the "peace" it could be good to see some slice of life shorts of the life of Akatsuki after the war.

Not just Kamehameha; I noticed some Pokémon moves in there, too. :D

Oh snap, is Team Deidara gonna happen?

Huh, in the hundreds of Naruto stories I've read over the years, I don't remember any starting like this. You've just raised the bar so I hope I'll continue to be surprised by you in the upcoming chapters.

poor expectations. getting smashed into a thousand pieces must be painful.

Ch1 made me go: "Awesome! This is original & looks like it'll be reeeally interesting!"
My reaction to Ch2: "EPIC! Naruto is cute, & he then becomes rivals/friends with Deidara-senpai! Plus they're in Akatsuki!" *grins like Obito* "AWESOMENESS!"

so so good so good love the balance

Ok, this was impressive. Well done !

i'm confused now... you said in the first chapter that naruto was the nine-tails host, but now sora is? can you explain this please? i'm just not understanding...

I don't think I have ever went from 60 to 0 that fast. Sora ruined this for me.

I remember reading this story then stopping half way through for some reason I can't recall. Anyway, just finished this and it's really amazing.

Kisame uses Aqua Jet! Roshi avoided the attack.

Been a few years, but I think it's time for reread.

I'm sorry I wish I could overlook it and logically as this was written before guy open all 8 gates I should but come on he survived that and u need to add some more creativity to the deaths instead of through the heart every time

Don't get me wrong I love this story I'm currently at chpt 13 and I actually am glad to have found a good story where the katsuki aren't always being overtaken by plot armor characters but it odes seem as though you are under playing the skill of the main characters and are just killing them to kill them