Reviews for Dawn's Sage
thestorymaker2 chapter 3 . 1/6/2014
Hope he knows more jutsu than sage mode
Major Session chapter 17 . 1/5/2014
Despite how painful it must have been to write, Killer Bee, the jinchuuriki sounded just right.

Bad rhyme is bad.
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 15 . 1/5/2014
Oh me oh my, we finally get to Jaraiya and Naruto meeting (perhaps fighting) and to top it of we have Itachi and Sasuke fighting...

AWESOME
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 14 . 1/5/2014
hmm, nice chapter... i wonder who is gonna win between Sasuke and Itachi
Anon chapter 17 . 1/5/2014
this is a really great well-written fic with a cool idea
im curious as to how deidara finding naruto and everything else will play out
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 13 . 1/5/2014
hell yeah, great chapter and far more realistic then canon... S-Ranked nin are feared for a reason and you are clearly showing the difference between S-Ranked compared to B - A-Ranked nin
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 12 . 1/5/2014
decided to keep reading (after all, you hadnt actually confirmed anything about Sasuke in last chap) and rather enjoyed this chapter... still looking forward to Naruto vs Jaraiya, also looking forward to Sasuke and Sora getting an ass whooping (though death would be better)

Pain is going to be awesome once he takes to the field (at least i hope so)
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 10 . 1/5/2014
well, i dont think i will be reading anymore... you are doing a Kishimoto, except instead of some lame ass power because of his pathetic eyes your going to give him sage mode...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 9 . 1/5/2014
i look forward to Jiraiya and Naruto's battle... still think Sora and Sasuke suck and am hoping/waiting for there death... oh, and if you kill Sasuke have him bloody stay dead, nothing worse when an author kills him off only for him to come back stronger
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 8 . 1/5/2014
Sasuke sucks, also he should be far weaker then canon as no training by Orochi... having Sasuke and/or Sora as Naruto's main problem is laughable at best... really there aint any ninja in leaf apart from Jairiya and Tsunade who would be much of a problem..

And if you do Canon style for Sasuke so he is a match for Naruto i will be beyond pissed... its bad enough that Kishimoto has a MASSIVE hard on for the Uchiha's and Sasuke in particular
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 7 . 1/5/2014
lol, they couldnt even beat kakashi 2 on 1 without using the book method of canon... that alone they stand no chance against a single member of akatsuki... and they think they ready lololololol
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 6 . 1/5/2014
good chapter, loved Naruto and Diadara talk about the Owl and if they sealed the bijuu in a giant jar or chained them to the ground... had me on the ground in laughter
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 5 . 1/4/2014
i loved the look between Kisame and Itachi when they killed Yagura
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 4 . 1/4/2014
this really just seems like canon but with minor changes, like just a switch of names...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 3 . 1/4/2014
not sure why you bothered adding someone to take Naruto's place, and Sora sucks. he has only a tiny minuscule amount of kyuubi's chakra and will be absolutely no match against Akatsuki...

I will read a couple more chapters to see how you handle Sora before i decide if i will drop or not
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