The trickster

Ngl I kinda wanted more Deidara and Naruto interactions in the Epilogue but god damn this fanfic is really good stuff bro, good job.

Definitely in my top 10 absolutely love this story

Meirochimaru is best Orochimaru.

I've got nothing against Sora taking the place of canon Naruto since he technically is a partial Kyuubi jinchuuriki in the actual series, but let's be honest here, nobody wants to read arcs in his point of view.

Dunno why you added Sora. Just made this whole story pretty distasteful and boring.

every reference EVER!
about to die laughing. great story, best chapter yet!
THANK YOU

Very good story. Does exactly what it sets out to do in a unique way.

Dear god this is some hot, HOT garbage.

Does that mean Naruto isn't the jinchuuriki

This is fucking stupid how did he become evil all of a sudden

Naruto is a minor character in this story!?
No one seems major but sora and rookie 9 takes up most of your story, especially repeat of canon(INCLUDING FILLERS).
Your concept is good but story is almost being ruined by this.

I don't get it, Naruto found a madman that just slaughtered their employer, told him about his plan to bring peace by destroying the world and then he just says Yes without hesitation? What about his own tailed beast?
Ah i think i get it, this Pein has a gamer power with Charisma bumped to 9000 right? the one that makes women faint just by being near them and men worship him like the god of all right?

Good

So good