| Reviews for Dawn's Sage |
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  Guest chapter 2 . 9/15/2013 supert history |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/14/2013 Progressing far too quickly and I can already see the makings of a terrible convulted plot.. The akastuki should stay the fuck out of this fic. Doesn't fit at all. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2013 Ugh using the akatsuki is a terrible idea, why would you write this shit?an And gender bends? Thinly veiled yaoi. Terrible. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/14/2013 Terribly rushed, he just explains the entire kyuubi thing like its nothing and naruto doesn't even react, what is this shit? |
 Sicloup chapter 2 . 9/14/2013 Did you just do a 2 year time skip without even a line break? Lol wtf |
| Phoenixmaster98 chapter 1 . 9/7/2013 This is a great idea |