Reviews for Dawn's Sage
582Raven chapter 6 . 8/15/2019
This is getting difficult to read, Naruto's nerf and the way it's ridiculously easy to zone out during the passage are a struggle
Visual Bliss chapter 10 . 8/14/2019
Soooo you are basically making naruto weak... By the time he was 17 he had been the strongest alongside sasuke and he is at least 20 something right now and yet kakashi AND asuma were keeping up with him you are honestly doing naruto dirty I know he was already exhausted prior to facing them but come on are you honestly making naruto into a weak shit? Reading to this point in your story is making me feel frustrated and disappointed...
Visual Bliss chapter 8 . 8/14/2019
Why isn't naruto using rasengan? Please don't give it to sora
Visual Bliss chapter 6 . 8/14/2019
Your story had a good concept going but if it's just going to be naruto weaker then he should be then that is just disappointing
Visual Bliss chapter 5 . 8/14/2019
Duuuuuuude have you read the manga or watch the entire anime at all? While I'm sure obito would have tough time fighting nagato and his paths in pretty damn sure he wouldn't lose to him... I honestly think you are nerfing naruto at this point I mean when he was 17 he was the strongest in the world (sasuke slightly behind him) it feels like you are making him weak as shit so that partial jinchuriki sora could beat him
Visual Bliss chapter 3 . 8/14/2019
Sage mode helped naruto fight nagato evenly didn't it? Soooo why are you nerfing it? I mean I know you're not trying to make him OP right out the gate but come on this story had a too good a concept for you to go and do that to it... I swear if you go and nerf KCM too I'm dropping this story...
Guest chapter 3 . 7/31/2019
How the fuck did Naruto get rid of the Kyubi?
Guest chapter 8 . 6/29/2019
Lol at Pein boasting of past conquests.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/28/2019
Makes sense. Canon sage mode is kind of bullshit. It makes Naruto Superman compared to regular ninjas.
Fererer chapter 7 . 6/7/2019
I folowed this till chapter seven, then i got annoyed because I don’t see what you are trying to make this fic be, in my opinion there is a big deficit in the plot, I don’t know where but I know it is there.
Guest chapter 27 . 3/20/2019
Wow! Amazing story! By far one of the best stories here.
cursedbloodsect chapter 3 . 3/8/2019
sadly sora ruined this for me. have a nice life. bye
thermalplayer88 chapter 27 . 2/14/2019
Thank you for the good read. Hope you have a good day.
lara5170 chapter 3 . 1/21/2019
So does Naruto still have the real Kyubi? From what I recall Sora didn't have the actual Kyubi within him right?
lara5170 chapter 2 . 1/21/2019
Naruto agreed to be controlled?
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