Reviews for Dawn's Sage |
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Jack chapter 1 . 1/4/2019 Not what I was expecting thou I think I'll like it. |
Wysrd chapter 27 . 1/3/2019 I AM SAGE OF SIX PATHS! Finally finished reading this. Damn this was heck of a ride and probably best Naruto pairing I read in any fanfic. I mean Deidara(fem) is really cute. You also really know how to build up hype. I mean all the fights were really hyped up and almost all lived up to that hype. Especially that fire tample fight, that fight was my favorite. And when Naruto turned into Sage Of Six Path Mode that was also a very hype moment. Though I'm wondering, why this fic doesn't have more Reviews, Favorite and Follows? Anyways I really loved this fic and I hope you continue writing more fics like this. Thanks for this fic and good luck. |
Wysrd chapter 5 . 1/1/2019 I don't know why but Pain thinking he had defeated Madara Uchiha is really funny. Oh*sigh*. If only he knew. So tobi is dead? I what's gonna happened with Moon's Eye plan. Thanks for your work and good luck. |
Guest chapter 27 . 11/30/2018 Wow, I haven't ever seen Sage mode so Blatantly abused, but I suppose you can also say that its a tool like the sharingan or any other. Nevertheless I just finished this and it was a great read. |
Guest chapter 25 . 11/30/2018 This was really good, don't get me wrong, but I just can't forget how underpowered you made gai. Gai in the 8th gate was able to be on Par with Juubi Madara for a while. You made Naruto beat him with Sage Mode alone. |
Mugglewizard chapter 27 . 11/9/2018 A very interesting story. It starts out weak but then really builds up. I liked the plot and how everything eventually went down. I was a bit disappointed in how the Jinchuriki were captured so fast. I mean they are meant to be the weapons of mass destruction but then some crazy S Rank ninja can get them with ease. I also hoped some more Akatsuki members would die. That would have been fun. Especially Kakuzu. Why did you kill Bee? It served no purpose at the point. They had already obtained the chakra from the horn for the 8 tails. Also hoped Kakashi survived. He survived so many other encounters with the Akatsuki before. I was also hoping for a view of Sasuke back in the Leaf in the epilogue. Once more, liked the story a lot. |
Guest chapter 14 . 11/4/2018 Major Character Death Count: 12 (Damn, I don;t think I've ever read a fanfic that was so blatantly heartless about who they killed.) Asuma-sensei Gai-sensei Neji Choji Sora Lee Sai Kiba Shino |
MANY1001 chapter 13 . 11/4/2018 ,o0o! |
MeAndNotYou1001 chapter 9 . 11/4/2018 HOLY SHIT! YOU JUST KILLED SAKURA! Major Character Death Count: 3 (4, if you count Gaara) |
Newline chapter 27 . 9/27/2018 There is absolutely no way that what you describe could ever achieve any kind of peace in Naruto's world. It's completly ridiculous to imagine that the elemental nations are going to bow to an organisation they must hate as much as the Akatsuki, at best it is a few years ceasefire before one or severals villages attack them to have their revenge. Naruto did not end the circle of war, it just created a new one. And there is two possible outcomes, Akatsuki continue to rule with an iron fist and put down revolt after revolt or the Akatsuki fall and there is no garantee that the villages will not go back to their previous rivalries. What a depressing world you have created. |
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 27 . 9/12/2018 Very interesting take. Mildly devastated at the amount of dead characters...but the writing was wonderfully done! |
Moe chapter 27 . 9/11/2018 Also a quick lol from my side after some reviews, seems like a lot of people got turned off quite fast... |
Moe chapter 27 . 9/11/2018 Holy fucking shit, stand the fuck down. This story was true art. No kidding, no nothing. I enjoyed this fic so much... I can‘t even describe it, but this fic made my day tbh, I had been searching for an Akatsuki!Naruto fic where he wasn‘t secretely a spy and the ‚good guy’ and manipulated all other members into death. It had been a long road but the end made all worth it. There is only a slight complain, that isn‘t even a real complain, namely that now I want a FemDeidaraxNaruto fic right now, wish me luck finding something decent about that xd. ~M |
Percyjackson56 chapter 10 . 9/3/2018 Hi |
Guest chapter 14 . 9/1/2018 I had high hopes for this story... So disappointing... You need to learn balance my friend, Akatski is not all powerful, and the four from last chapter should all be dead. Naruto survived thru 8th gate Gai... C'mon bro, 10 tails Madara barely managed that. I'm not gonna read anymore of this story, it's not even interesting anymore... |