Reviews for The Brothers Who Were No Longer Brothers
Mariachanne chapter 1 . 7/24
u should make another chapter based on when they meet up again as teens i. the same school
TheDuckIsComing chapter 1 . 7/22
*yandere face* you're all mine
xlilcupcakes chapter 1 . 5/30
This was so sad 8(((
It was really interesting though! if you want to continue it that would be friggin awesome! but at the same time the ending for this works well
anyways, just want to say that I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORIESS 3
ViolentHappyChick chapter 1 . 5/7
this would be a good multi-chapter story
LuciferRin72 chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
Ahh... I really wish that it could be continue...I mean, i dont really mind depressing story but at least make Luffy not too depressing like they would meet again, Luffy reactions when they meet again... Not like im flaming you or something but, im dont have experiences like others but could you make it like i said? If you dont want then i dont mind... Because this fic was published a year ago...
shirokid213 chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
I enjoyed it. I love depressing stories after all
asura.keji chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
This... this is beautiful. Please make moooooooooor
Poisoned Sidd chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
You should add another chapter. This is really good!
WingsofaBelle chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
GAH! Ace and Sabo are so stupid! not telling luffy just to avoid a scene! This story has really great potential for a long story! I really want to see them meet up again, where ace and sabo are thinking its okay and are happy to see luffy again while luffy is just restraining the urge to beat them up! and maybe while they try and be forgiven, luffy won't let them and then shanks comes back and adopts him, leaving the other two behind without a word like they did and regretting what they did... Wow i seem very sadistic... i promise im not usually this way but your story really brought it out... Please continue this story!
BlueRubyBeat chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
That's sad. I really want to see what would happen if they all met again. Kinda hoping Luffy would beat them! Never thought I could hate a character that was one of my favorites, but you did!
Yuu3 chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
Wow, you really like to make Luffy suffer and be miserable don't you? You really like to make me suffer heart aches and spilling tears don't you? ...Damn, I was really hopeful when Shanks showed up too.
mandacub chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
I love this story. I really want this story to go on, I already have the whole thing in my head!
general yumi chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
U should continue it with a time skip thingy where the brothers meet again
shit bruh chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
I love this story so much! Thank you for writing it.
Frostheart D. Blaize chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
this should have an overly epic, touchy feely sequel!
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