Reviews for RWBY : Somewhere You Belong
seanfergus516 chapter 12 . 8/30/2017
that was the most wired ending i ever read

what happen to ruby what happen to every thing
so she just dies that horrible

please do a next one
Lucia Merinero chapter 12 . 8/23/2017
I love this serie! Please DO make a sequel!
N1ghtw0lf95 chapter 12 . 6/16/2016
I almost cried when Ruby breaks down; please continue with a sequel to the story, it just can't end like this!
SOUTHMENACE90 chapter 12 . 2/6/2016
wasn't the best because it was just cliche after cliche. it had almost no personality to it. it also had a lot of grammar issues, if you could get a beta reader it would be better, and try to take your stories in longer and more unpredictable tangents. However don't stop writing because there is plenty of room for you to improve.
Guest chapter 12 . 11/6/2015
that was awful
kapper33 chapter 12 . 5/12/2015
Yes for a sequel
Natural Born Flamer chapter 3 . 10/17/2014
This chapter's getting interesting
Natural Born Flamer chapter 2 . 10/17/2014
Bah, this is bad
Natural Born Flamer chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
I hope this is getting better than the prev story...
Fourze chapter 4 . 9/30/2014
What is the difference between a human grimm and a grim human. Aren't they the same thing?
Dusia chapter 12 . 3/18/2014
I really love this story. Hope u will write more. :3
Scourge From BloodClan chapter 4 . 2/16/2014
Attack of the Titans? ;)
Michael chapter 4 . 12/19/2013
Nice. maybe Yang should learn how to use a scythe like Ruby does.
Garrett Gernhart chapter 12 . 12/2/2013
I loved this chapter and both of the stories; Monster Inside Me and this one. But for this chapter in particular, I felt that there was something missing, and that this chapter should have been longer. Either way, I would LOVE it if you made another sequel. The story can't end here! If you make another sequel or not, I had fun reading this, and I'm sure you had fun making it! Thanks. Can't wait for the sequel if there is one!
Guest chapter 12 . 9/23/2013
good story but for me it need some closure...
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