Reviews for CHARLIE'S |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry, I wish I could continue, but there are so many grammar and spelling mistakes, it's nearly impossible to read. Get a beta and repost! |
![]() ![]() ![]() if i would have known there would be no sequel i wouldnt have read this |
![]() ![]() ![]() 51 chapters and Edward still hasnt did anything mafia-like. not really a mafia story, more like a man finding love while being in a mafia family. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg she’s pregnant isn’t she? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is now the 3rd time you’ve told the full Jacob story. every chapter is repetitive. the story line is great, but i have to skip over so much because you retell every part. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the chapters are starting to get repetitive. recapping the same chapter and situation from both point of views, unnecessary. good storyline though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cant wait for more i read this so many times |
![]() ![]() ![]() Miscarrying is very painful but mine wasnt a natural way to have it leave my body. The doctor had to insert a pill which caused contractions to make it happen, and it was devistating. At least it was for me. I was at 11 weeks but it had died at 7 weeks. So with that thought and finding it out im sure you can see how devistating it was and still is mentally. And ive had 14 years to deal with that. I wont tell my whole story but my abusive exhusband wasnt exactly nice to me about it all. You are doing pretty good with this story. I hope their is a sequel. |
![]() ![]() I hope there is a sequel to this story it has been a long time :~) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you very going to post sequel? |
![]() ![]() I wasted a lot of time reading this story, only to find out that it isn't finished, and considering the promise you made to finish it was in 2018 I doubt it ever will be finished. I'll give you the same advice that I give others, if the story isn't complete, DON'T MARK IT AS COMPLETE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does the status say complete if it's not? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why do I have a feeling the mob is connected to Charlie's death? |
![]() ![]() HAVING READ TOUR COMMENT AT THE HEAD OF THIS CHAPTER OF NOT BEING EDITED, I EILL JUST SAY THIS ; YOU NEED SOME ONE TO PROF-READ YOUR STORY. HAVING SAID THAT, I THANK YOU FOR WRITING AND PUTTING YOUR STORIES ON FAN-FICTION FOR EVERONE TO READ AND ENJOY. THANK YOU, THANK YOU, .9-21-23 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue i want more |