Reviews for CHARLIE'S
WordsMusicMagic chapter 1 . 2/11
Sorry, I wish I could continue, but there are so many grammar and spelling mistakes, it's nearly impossible to read. Get a beta and repost!
4evernaya.0 chapter 1 . 2/3
if i would have known there would be no sequel i wouldnt have read this
4evernaya.0 chapter 51 . 2/3
51 chapters and Edward still hasnt did anything mafia-like. not really a mafia story, more like a man finding love while being in a mafia family.
4evernaya.0 chapter 44 . 2/2
omg she’s pregnant isn’t she?
4evernaya.0 chapter 24 . 2/1
this is now the 3rd time you’ve told the full Jacob story. every chapter is repetitive. the story line is great, but i have to skip over so much because you retell every part.
4evernaya.0 chapter 16 . 2/1
the chapters are starting to get repetitive. recapping the same chapter and situation from both point of views, unnecessary. good storyline though.
Navywife07 chapter 53 . 11/10/2024
I cant wait for more i read this so many times
Cballard79 chapter 48 . 8/28/2024
Miscarrying is very painful but mine wasnt a natural way to have it leave my body. The doctor had to insert a pill which caused contractions to make it happen, and it was devistating. At least it was for me. I was at 11 weeks but it had died at 7 weeks. So with that thought and finding it out im sure you can see how devistating it was and still is mentally. And ive had 14 years to deal with that. I wont tell my whole story but my abusive exhusband wasnt exactly nice to me about it all. You are doing pretty good with this story. I hope their is a sequel.
leahreallyitis chapter 32 . 7/7/2024
I hope there is a sequel to this story it has been a long time :~)
jma4397 chapter 54 . 7/6/2024
Are you very going to post sequel?
Guest chapter 54 . 2/11/2024
I wasted a lot of time reading this story, only to find out that it isn't finished, and considering the promise you made to finish it was in 2018 I doubt it ever will be finished. I'll give you the same advice that I give others, if the story isn't complete, DON'T MARK IT AS COMPLETE!
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 54 . 1/17/2024
Why does the status say complete if it's not?
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 1 . 1/17/2024
Why do I have a feeling the mob is connected to Charlie's death?
Guest chapter 25 . 9/21/2023
HAVING READ TOUR COMMENT AT THE HEAD OF THIS CHAPTER OF NOT BEING EDITED, I EILL JUST SAY THIS ; YOU NEED SOME ONE TO PROF-READ YOUR STORY. HAVING SAID THAT, I THANK YOU FOR WRITING AND PUTTING YOUR STORIES ON FAN-FICTION FOR EVERONE TO READ AND ENJOY. THANK YOU, THANK YOU, .9-21-23
Navywife07 chapter 54 . 8/30/2023
Please continue i want more
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