HAVING READ TOUR COMMENT AT THE HEAD OF THIS CHAPTER OF NOT BEING EDITED, I EILL JUST SAY THIS ; YOU NEED SOME ONE TO PROF-READ YOUR STORY. HAVING SAID THAT, I THANK YOU FOR WRITING AND PUTTING YOUR STORIES ON FAN-FICTION FOR EVERONE TO READ AND ENJOY. THANK YOU, THANK YOU, .9-21-23

Please continue i want more

Hi just read this and was wondering if your going to post the sequel as I’m hooked

I really hope you never pull this story. It is amazing and so captivating.

Please update

Loved this story but I'm sad that there isn't more :( If you ever do get back around to finishing this story Id love to read it!

IT'S BEEN 5 YEARS!
I THINK YOU HAVE KEPT US WAITNG LONG ENOUGH. IT DOES'NT TAKE 5 YEARS TO MOVE. PLEASE COME BACK AND CONTINUE THIS STORY AND THE SEQUEL.

I really enjoyed this story

I love this story. But it’s really unfair to mark it complete when it if far from complete! Then to say there is a sequel and 5 years later no sequel unbelievable. You should mark this story as incomplete, So people don’t go to read it only to get let down with no ending! . You should be ashamed of yourself!

Please please say your continuing with a story I have read it a couple of times just waiting for the sequel

Can’t wait for the sequel

Wtf? I thought this was completed. It just stops and you said you would finish and you never did. Lake.

If you were going to quit, at least give an Authors Note to let people know.

Oh dear lord this is so hard to read. Good plot from what little I could read but maybe try reading it yourself & correct all the errors before posting.

You have got to be kidding me ! This isn’t complete . Seriously and then you say you’re writing the sequel and yet here we are 4 years later and ya got nothing . Wow

Wow oh wow. I can look past the translation and misspelled words or even the duplicates . But making this as Bella I’m actually disgusted and as someone who went through something similar I would have never done what she did . This was way out of hand . This is just wrong