Reviews for From Afar
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10
Wonderfully written.I wish there are more fanfiction about this pairing.
Nameless Knight chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
Young Elize's vocabulary is maybe a tad too verbous but that's about the only qualm I have with this. A nice fic.
AngelWithACrookedHalo chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Not bad for a little one-shot! I'm very happy to see the pairing, that's for sure! It seems like this is the only fic on this site that pairs Jude and Elise. ;w; And you did a pretty good job on this. I would love to see more of the pair in the future from you. -
Kazoot chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
This was very nice! I always thought that Elize and Jude were a better pairing, especially since Jude is the one who initially brings Elize on the journey. Personally, I think her relationship with Jude is easier to picture than with Alvin. And props for being the only (and supposedly, first) person for writing a story on these two.

The ONLY thing that would have made this better, was if it was more of a story (y'know, plot and all), and it didn't just focus on how she felt in the beginning, and after the end of the game.
Tupi chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Since all you disapprovers of elizexalvin are reading this I'd like to say that ironically I think that the game is lacking and needs, well , a third game! But unlike before you will not be able to play as milla or Jude or even elize no my friend. You will be playing as mark! I will use a fanfic to put into play the opening cutscene. It begins with a young boy running towards his mother when, all of a sudden, a red glint catches his eye.(ps scene is anime) I shall write more later.
Phoenix-Thunder chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
dawww, this was a sweet and adorable oneshot! Awesome job! :D
Sentinel07 chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
Short and sweet. I like it, and congrats on being the first to do this.
diety chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
aww so sweet jude saiding he feels the same as she deos