|Reviews for Contained|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/15
I will find you... And I will kill you...
LOL! Taken is the best movie evaaaa! Lol! Great story btw!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/9
Plz write more this is realy interesting and definetly going domewhere btw i love your fiolee fanfics your an amazing writer _
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/5
I can't believe you are 16! You're naughty doing this to them but I like it lol
| srghostarc11 chapter 9 . 2/2
Dudette got raped, dude apologized, dudettte accepted the apology, and they fell in loved with each other.
All in the span of two days at the most?
...Well, I don't think Marshall being good-looking will justify Fionna's complete 180.
| Avatar Ophelia chapter 10 . 1/16
Oh my glob, This was amazing seriously awesome! Your a fantastic writer and I loved this story! One of the best in have read in a while! :D
| AshsNewMoon chapter 10 . 12/18/2013
Good story! I felt like their love was a bit fast but I really enjoyed it! :3 any plans for a sequel? Like if we get to see Marshall and Fionna babies? :)
| Cassie Malfoy97 chapter 10 . 12/5/2013
this story is Stockholm syndrome to the max. To a point where she is bipolar. Love it though.
| Random Guest chapter 10 . 11/22/2013
Why I read '50 shades of grey' scenes in every M rated fanfic
| RomanticGirly23 chapter 10 . 11/15/2013
| RomanticGirly23 chapter 4 . 11/15/2013
I love this story its like cute and fluffy but in the sexiest way possible. I don't even get how that works but it must mean your an amazing writer. I wish it wasn't complete because I usually enjoy long stories, but im really looking forward to the end of it!
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/11/2013
Its a cute story line. But I think there needed to be more in the resolution. And what he did to her was bassicully rape. Rape isn't resolved with an 'I'm sorry' and love isn't generally found in a week after being raped by said dude.
I think if you made the span of time they were together in there, and they slowly worked out their problems would have been more realistic.
Besides that grammar, punctuation and spelling in your fic makes me jump with happiness! Well done on the fic!
| Finnismathmatical chapter 8 . 11/10/2013
Awww, ice Queen is being so sweet. I can actually imagine ice king doing that actually.
| BlueScarlet465 chapter 10 . 11/6/2013
The end was good
Prepare for vampire kids, Fionna
| warrioresscat chapter 10 . 11/5/2013
I loved it! Please make a 2nd story where they have a baby and where it includes a ton more hot lemons.
| Kurbykakes chapter 10 . 11/5/2013
what you should do is have cake walk in right as they finish and want to scratch marshalls eyes out :3 his oh so beautiful eyes :3 if you ask me this story could go a long way