Reviews for The Captain And The Menace
Iceheart15 chapter 3 . 11/2/2013
I've never read anything quite like this and I do mean it in a good way. Well done for an interesting plot, it was well written just some minor grammar and punctuation errors. other than that, excellent.
thebellimelli chapter 3 . 9/29/2013
This is so sweet. I cried so hard :3
Mini-Moffie13 chapter 3 . 9/16/2013
AMAAAAAAZZZIINNNNNNGGGGGGG! Aw I am glad that there was a kind of happy ending, they got to be together and that is what matters the most! Amzing story, I loved every chapter of it, even though it made me sob and cry :3 excellently done my friend x
Mini-Moffie13 chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
*sobs in the corner of the room* oh my, so good, so so so so so so good! Its heart breaking but it is so good! Amazingly written and so packed with emotion. It is good to see Khan cracking and letting emotion out. Amazing in every way my friend :3
zeynel chapter 2 . 9/13/2013
sounds interesting! *grins*
Minecraft Guardiansaiyan chapter 2 . 9/11/2013
Damn! Great writing! Great deepness! Don't giv about the pairing but nice story!
Mini-Moffie13 chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
OMG!
AMAZING! ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!
I just sat here reading this and I bloody well sobbed my heart out! It was so well written! It was absolutely incredible! I am still welling up! I think that death scene was a HELL of a lot better than the one I wrote! You captured the emotions and the feelings and the aura perfectly, it was absolutely incredible. Well done my friend! Well done! Now... Now I need to go and find some tissues because I have flooded the living room XD