Please write a sequel to this story. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

Lovely
xxx

This was an interesting short. You handle the dialogue very very well. It's a true conversation. I also feel you keep everyone in character very well. It'd be fun to see where this could go to

Oh this is so sweet. A perfect way to explore a more pleasant "what if" than the awful evening it was in canon. The choice of a menage-a-troi is not the most obvious development, but it doesn't feel wrong either. And did you hint at PADMA being Fleur's partner in that edge in the hedges? Nice idea too!

Was trully interested in this fic because of the missing moment and the headcanon in it...

interesting up the good writing

Another nice trademark fic of yours. It would be nice to see Harry actually attending that dance school - I'm sure there are loads of otehr things to be learned there as well...

BTW: Who did Fleur ask to dance? Padma, most likely? Poor Ron, but then, perhaps not. There's always Seamus...

Congrats for knowing the right way to REALLY spell Seamus' name. Few people will know about that little accent.

That was a sweet fic there, and liked that you used two of the underutilized characters in HP-fandom, Lavender and Parvarti, who got a bad shake by JKR imo.

That was surprisingly good! I was expecting it to be a bit crap to be honest, becuase i haven't before seen a serious harry/parvati/lavender fic, or even a serious h/p or h/l. Maybe that is just me though. Anyway, that was interesting, well written, and leaves me wondering what happens next; altogether very good!

Good story so far.

that was good

Good story, this would have made the fourth book much more interesting.

Sweet story. Can't believe that I said that. I loved it and hope for more.

Paul

Great story man i loved it i hope you write more Parvati x Harry x Lavender stories and if you know where i can find an please tell me thank you

I liked it. A sequel would be cool but I doubt we'll get one. Many of Andrew Aelfwine's stories are perfect for sequels or more chapters, but he never writes them. *Sniff* Oh well. He's still on my Favorite authors list.