|Reviews for Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood: The Fires Within|
| Who-Am-I-To-One-That-Dislikes chapter 4 . 3/15/2014
Please update this, it's sooooooo good!
| Miko Vampire chapter 4 . 3/7/2014
Mustang wins then Ed runs for his life while Roy "hunts" him down to "punish" him right?
| MARYLOVER chapter 4 . 1/26/2014
This chapter was so intense I don't know where to begin. This Ed wanting to kill Roy first then Father, and later he tought better and wanted Father first then Roy, made me smile because he's definitely like that XD
And sorry but I just can't love this Roy, not when he's like that, but that doesn't mean He's not interesting as a character, quite the contrary, I want to know how you explore that dark being.
Funny how this fic begins with a huge climax, that means somehow there will be calm so we'd see how things get settled.
Anyway, nice read so far,eager to read more from it. Bye.
| TheSmilingFallenAngel chapter 4 . 1/26/2014
you're not alone. I love crazyandpossessive!Roy too because he's a hell lot sexier that way XDD
wow, so intense and dark. it's been a long time since I last read a story like yours. Thanks for sharing this and I absolutely will be waiting for updates XD
| Sam's Laptop chapter 4 . 1/25/2014
I can't help but keep thinking about the size of Ed's arms now. Scar was a lot bigger than him...
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/25/2014
Well. I'm stuck somewhere between 'fuck' and 'holy shit'. I'm certain you know exactly why. This has just been... yeah. Holy fucking shit.
| Shelentei1991 chapter 4 . 1/25/2014
Oh my god this story was amazing! I hope Roy's soul isn't lost forever ( he was such a good man. Go Edward! You can do it and bring these bastards to their knees! Update soon I loved this story D xxx
| UP2L8 chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
Great start! It's been awhile since a fanfic had caught my interest so completely, and I will definitely be coming back to read more. Thanks for sharing.
| MARYLOVER chapter 3 . 10/28/2013
The chapter was quite intense to say the least, this idea of a HUGE twist looks good but I don't know, this Father joining the good guys how? how did Hohenheim convince Father to help them? does he really want to do that? if they win what's next for Father? he has ALL the sins inside of him so he's not trustworthy, that seems a bit odd, really odd, we just have to wait and read what happens.
And I really want to think Ed got distracted with everything that was happening around him, I mean, he saw Roy and his heart reacted but just for a little bit until the end when the time to end Roy's life came and cried, but that's okay I guess, his determination hasn't faltered as I thought it might, he wants Roy dead... sighs...
Now I really want that next chapter to be updated right away, I don't know, I can't guess a thing and... are you sure this is a RoyEd? Bye
| Shane chapter 2 . 9/29/2013
| MARYLOVER chapter 2 . 9/15/2013
I found this fic the moment I saw it on AO3 but it's just now when I found time to actually read it and yes, it is SO promising! the plot may be dark but I like the idea of this Ed chasing Roy in order to kill him and stop whatever he supposedly has done. As you start from episode 53, there are several other characters that where about to appear such as that crazy doctor, pride, wrath and those huge puppet dudes that could easily subdue Roy. Anyway, I may be babbling and your plot may diverge from Brotherhood, but there's something I know for sure, there's the side story that is the Promise Day as Ed can't be considered as sacrifice anymore because he's supposed dead, what other powerful enough alchemist can replace him? can Father sense him now that he was brought back to life again? Oh and I'd like to know more about that other array Ed found and what exactly he gave to the Gate and hasn't realized yet.
I can't believe there's any room for romance in this fic yet, but as you put it as a main genre then I really hope there's some very far in the horizon.
Great job so far, looking forward to more of it. Bye
| Sam's Laptop chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
Wow! You promised horror and romance in equal measure and you delivered!
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
I'm sorry, but asdfghjkl. He killed Hawkeye, killed Scar, indirectly killed Alphonse and attempted to kill Edward, and killed an unknown number of anonymous people. He really has lost it, hasn't he? But there is always that second array to wonder about...
| Inumimi1 chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
Can't wait to see where you are taking this!