|Reviews for Naruto the Vampire Jinchuriki|
| myulander chapter 1 . 4/16
| jwaters822 chapter 14 . 4/1
Pretty cool story dude keep. It up
| Master118 chapter 14 . 3/23
| Element-OverLord chapter 14 . 3/10
OK, For OC I Suggest:
Name: Ranmakyu Konton (Prefers to be called Ranma. Also nod to Ranma 1/2)
Sex: Male (Can shape-shift into female through transformation for pranking. Nod to Naruto himself)
Hair: White, with black streaks
Skin: Regular, with some tan
Eyes: Yellow, with red pupils
Clothes: He wears a white long-sleeved shirt with a black vest on top, brown pants with a red belt, and gray boots.
Likes: Chaos, Bizarre things, Video games, Pranks, Pizza
Dislikes: Annoying things, Party whoopers, Arrogant people, Hypocrites
Hobbies: Pranking, Reading books, Eating pizza, Playing video games
Expy: From Discord Of My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic.
Personality: Prankster at heart, loves to cause pranks and chaos whenever he can, mostly to avoid monotoness. Cares for those whom he considers friends...even if he doesn't show it and/or pranks them. Respects/admires people like Naruto.
Dreams: Becoming a full powered S-Rank monster, Travel around the world, Publish a book about pranking.
Monster: Chimera (Draconequus Variation, nod to MLP Discord)
-Story: The Chimera (/kɨˈmɪərə/ or /kaɪˈmɪərə/, also Chimaera, Chimæra; Greek: Χίμαιρα, Chímaira) was, according to Greek mythology, a monstrous fire-breathing hybrid creature of Lycia in Asia Minor, composed of the parts of more than one animal. Usually depicted as a lion, with the head of a goat arising from its back, and a tail that might end with a snake's head, the Chimera was one of the offspring of Typhon and Echidna and a sibling of such monsters as Cerberus and the Lernaean Hydra.
The term chimera has come to describe any mythical or fictional animal with parts taken from various animals, or to describe anything composed of very disparate parts, or perceived as wildly imaginative, implausible, or dazzling.
The word "draconequus" is composed of the Latin "draco" or Greek "drakon", meaning "dragon", and the Latin "equus", meaning "horse".
-Form Appearance: On this form, Ranma looks like a brown chinese dragon with head is horse-like, much different from other horses' head styles. He has a deer antler on the right, a blue goat horn on the left, one long fang, different-sized pupils, a snake tongue, a goat beard, and white bushy eyebrows. He has the right arm of a lion, the left claw of an eagle, the right leg of a lizard, and the left leg of a goat. In addition, he has a bat's right wing, a Pegasus' left wing, a horse's mane, and a dragon-like snake's tail with a white tail tuft. The shape of his body resembles that of a snake.
-Superhuman Strength: C Rank
-Superhuman Speed: B Rank
-Superhuman Agility: A Rank
-Superhuman Reflexes: B Rank
-Superhuman Resistance: D Rank
-Magic: A Rank
-Ranma can warp reality to a seemingly indeterminable degree, such as changing the physical properties of the world around him and bending the laws of nature and physics, or at least a few miles around him. He is skilled at performing magic and manipulating the minds of other creatures with the exception of those stronger than him. He can also change his physical appearance and size with relative ease.
-Fire Breath: B Rank.
What You Think?
| otsoawulf chapter 14 . 2/26
i love reading about half your stories and the others i just havent rwad yet or dont interest me as much. you are easily top 3 favoite authors along with VFSNAKE and Delfim the Black kitsune. would love to see several stories updated but life is full of problems and you have to write about whatever inspires you. i look forward to readin any story that you update. i check daily to read hours after you update. may your muse keep inspiring you and you keep your hilarious writing style.
| ARSLOTHES chapter 14 . 2/24
Nice chapter, will the harem include the humans he has promised to marry/ make pregnant?
| Sadiqz chapter 14 . 2/21
try making a part when there's something higher than a dhampire like an origanal Naruto becomes an original vampire that will be the best and Naruto will be able to live as long as he wants because he's a vampire
| Ryu Master of Seals chapter 4 . 1/13
Dude that was so immature. When biting a boy when you're a vampire does not make you gay stupid.
| david.teague.3950 chapter 10 . 1/7
Do you have any intentions to continue this story because I just got one thing to say all out hilarity yo.
| PugTheMagician chapter 14 . 12/5/2014
i certainly liked this story so far. i am surprised that this was originally going to be your first story. i am a little sad that the original naruto ended up dying as a result of awakening his powers but i guess it is in keeping with how mokas outer was formed from her mother. i find the interactions between inner naruto and moka very interesting, especially how arrogant they are. i do think that you had naruto come to terms with suddenly being a vampire be extremely quick though. i really like how you have set up naruto and mizore's friendship originally through a common ground of loneliness. i especially like that you haven't horribly changed each of the charecters (minus naruto himself) in this story to fit your needs as is often done. yes there are changes, but not so much that you can't see the original charecter. i loved both the pranking war and naruto's rampage in moka's body. i look forward to more in the future. sadly i can't provide you with a OC simply because i severely lack in the imagination department and can't think of any yokai that hasn't already been used in the manga in case you have plans for them. if you have read the manga though instead of simply the anime then i suggest the shape shifter that came about soon after tsukune started using his "goul" powers, he seemed reasonably powerful and a interesting monster so i think you could probably do well with a OC with similar powers. sorry if that is unhelpful to you
| T51b Moridin chapter 14 . 12/1/2014
Ah but could the oc be paired with named male daaadun. Funny chapter though inner naru needs to get jis humor back lol.
| T51b Moridin chapter 13 . 12/1/2014
Jm. I do hope they perfectly fuse. Vampire naruto intelligence with true naruto fin loving prank pulling battle insanity would be the perfect person/warrior.
| T51b Moridin chapter 12 . 12/1/2014
Manliest mamly mother fucker. New name The Crimson Fucker loool.
| T51b Moridin chapter 11 . 12/1/2014
Totally makes sense. Love the body switch beat down. So great.
| T51b Moridin chapter 10 . 12/1/2014
Loved and i mean loved that chapter. Da best.