Reviews for Septa's Fate: The Games
Beezy91 chapter 13 . 7/2/2014
I really enjoyed this. I look forward to the sequal!
Guest chapter 9 . 12/16/2013
Is anyone else noticing little details she's missing i'll give you an example she said she made five swords she has one the careers have three and someone else has another yet she broke the sword that tribute four had
Annabeth Granger chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Really good job only erre I see is that peacekeepers is one word
Guest chapter 12 . 11/19/2013
Was the ending part of chapter twelve talking about katniss? If so, why is she in her seventies? She was 16 in the 74h hunger games. 26 years later for the 100 and something games she would then be in her forties.
SilverMoonrise chapter 11 . 11/17/2013
*and I quote* hmm...interesting...
D really, I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Damn, very good. Nearly could be made into a book...
Princess Unikitty chapter 11 . 11/11/2013
liked the dream in this chapter. can't wait to see how this ends.
salvation's legacy chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
I love your stories! They are very detailed and intriguing. Continue writing! You're good at it!
Princess Unikitty chapter 9 . 10/30/2013
liked the ending of this chapter. is it peeta

or haymitch
Princess Unikitty chapter 8 . 10/22/2013
a lot of things being done in this chapter. i suppose that's good.

and is it just me or are a lot of your lines of dialogue ending with periods? it's weird
Princess Unikitty chapter 7 . 10/16/2013
strange dream

pretty obvious allegory though septa will use katniss in some way to get what she wants
Princess Unikitty chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
interesting. the plot is dragging a bit, to be honest.
AlexLunaaah chapter 4 . 10/3/2013
Thank youuu! (:
I really liked that you begin to work in all these new factors of your story with your character. It definitely made her more interesting & I loveedd the design that you came up with for her dress..
Ohh & btw great idea with the Aguila history!
Update soon!
Princess Unikitty chapter 4 . 9/29/2013
another great chapter.
Princess Unikitty chapter 3 . 9/29/2013
great development. i liked the dialogue.
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