Reviews for In search of a Queen
XxXSmiles101XxX chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
Well done I was not expecting that to happen. Keep up the great work and please update soon :)
Guntz chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
LOL! Seriously though, it's a lucky thing dwarves have hard heads otherwise that book would've knocked Thorin until next week. Good chapter and I hope to read more!
bluephoenix65069 chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
Just4Me chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
You have the family relationships down perfectly..."because I do not trust my brother nor my father not to steal food from my plate." That made me laugh out loud, and think of my own father and brother. I think she is going to be the perfect antidote to brooding, grumpy Thorin. He'll never know what hit him.
SwanInProgress chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
That was possibly the best run-in with the King ever. I cackled insanely at their short interaction. It was so wonderful! And I'm glad that Truin is being a little nicer to Ruin. That makes my heart happy.
Keep it up, hun! :) This made my week.
kandula chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
Finally they meet lol. Please update soon I have for this update in what seems like forever
Mhunter chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
I laughed, I got scared, I snorted, then I cried, because for some reason I felt bad. I need more, more of this thorin book thing.
Anju R chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
Hahaha, oh that was perfect! I can imagine it all in my head too! The look on thorins face and then poor ruin!

I can honestly say that that's one way to get a kings attention! :) great scene.
Lady Forrest chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
You always cut it off at the good parts! Please update soon. :)
newtb00 chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
Hahahaha...the books stricks again! Thorin:0 Book:1. :-)
TMI Fairy chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
Music in the Memories chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
Hah! Hilarious! You made me squeak come the moment where Ruìn flung the book at Thorin! That was simply adorable. XD

Ohh, Thorin'll probably try and read that book, and understand SOMETHING. Nightmares tonight, anyone? XD

Well, sorry for the short review. But, alas, wailing siblings call to me!

Loves! Keep up the magnificent work!

(Mum's gonna find out, isn't she?)

Lorna chapter 6 . 10/10/2013
Hey, I looked at your profile and saw that you said:
"I've been on this site for years but rarely update anything because I'm not too confident with my writing any more"
and I don't understand why? Your stories are amazing (I also read happiness and a very unexpected journey)! I just wanted you to know that I think your stories (expecially this one) are extraordinary! Please keep writing your stories! I absolutely love 'in search of a queen' and I really want to know what happens!? Please keep writing and I hope my review gives you a bit more confidence in your writing!

Kind regards
Lorna Finch
TooLazyToSignIn chapter 6 . 10/8/2013
I love this AU... Love it love it love it! Your characters are actually believable, which is nice! Everything is very well written, and I'm enjoying this story so much :) please update soon... I need to know what happens haha
SwanInProgress chapter 6 . 10/7/2013
Holy cow! I just started reading this, pretty skeptical at first, but you have surprised me in the best of ways! This is prime reading material. I am so so glad that this isn't trying to rush into things like most stories do.
Your characters though! Your characters are possibly the best I've encountered in a Hobbit fanfic. Ever. Period. Rúin's family is just so great, with personality positively bursting forth!
My god, don't even get me started on your dialogue. I'm over here gushing at every little thing they say, because of how well-written it all is! It all flows so nicely and so naturally, it's hard to believe that this isn't real people talking!
Please - for the sake of my sanity and for the sake of contributing a work of literary art to this website - continue!
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