Love the humor in this story. Rúin's relationship with her family seems so real. I like her father and brother; her mother and sister not so much. I have a feeling Thorin in going to be intrigued by her, and how different she is from the simpering girls.

Love it...I hope to see Bilbo too in the fic, after all will be interesting seeing the dwarrowdams reactions to him.

Wonderful chapter! Hope there will be more Thorin/Ruin Scenes :-) UPDATE SOON!

I read this story in an hour today and this is amazing! I've never read any other story with this kind of plot so well written!
By Mahal, please update soon!
Do you have website that I could see a picture of the family?

Update soon please! Its getting more interesting!

I like how you're starting out. Please update soon.

Love it ;)

I hope you're still planning to update you're other story too! But I'm really enjoying this one as well! Keep it up!
Emily x

I loved it , it is totally fine with me to give them more years to live.

Thanks for explaining the age thing.
I was suspecting the candidates to be menopausal.

Borys

I like it so far! Boys always love a girl who can sport! I don't understand the mother. Doesn't she know different is good? The green dress makes her stand out in the swarm of blue. He is certain to remember the spacey girl without the perfect curtsy! I can't wait for an update!

THIS IS AWSOME! XD
srr to tell the truth but i like this ne better than the other story
I like the other story alot too mind that, but i really like this one a lot, it's already a favorite of mine XD

Please update soon! How interesting this story is!

You have done a great job. Ruin is such a awesome character.

A good start.
Although IMO the girls are a bit long in the tooth.
Borys