Reviews for And In The Darkness Bind Them |
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![]() ![]() ![]() is this immortal harry going to do anything or will he just be watching and doing nothing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, seldom seen an immortal that sounded so much like a 12 year old in an emo phase. |
![]() ![]() This shit is so gay it hurts |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful chapter. Made everyone think; I really liked that Viper likes to put the difficult and uncomfortable scenarios to people. You Rock! L |
![]() ![]() Also him changing his name to Viper is the most cringe thing I’ve read lol you are a fuckin weirdo if you thought this was a “cool” name or thought that it was a good idea lol dude has a name |
![]() ![]() Yup the one ring part where he collapses lol fuck this story what a waste of time... pussy Mc that was nerfed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Skye, hope that you're doing well as ever. I come back to read this story pretty much once a year just to refresh my mind as I know it took several years to get as far as you had anyway. All the best and I look forward to whenever the update will come. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This going to be updated? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my absolute favorite LOTR/Harry Potter fanfics ever and I’m so glad that you wrote it. I wish you the best where ever you are. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are a ton of grammatical mistakes in this chapter alone. I've seen incorrect usages of the semicolon, hyphen, and commas in addition to misspelled words and missing letters of words. Adjectives aren't properly used and there is awkward diction in nearly every paragraph. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story so far! Writer's block can be a bitch but still look forward to any potential future updates! :D |
![]() ![]() A Harry Potter and Lord of the Rings crossever where Harry is named Viper... Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd just imagine then finding a snake, like an actual viper, and him being like "oH look, its me!" |
![]() ![]() ![]() "shiny, but dangerous, yes it is.." *fish explaining fishhooks* |
![]() ![]() ![]() *just imagines tootlhess scene where hiccup has a thumbs up in the background* |