hey, I just wanted to say that I still love this fic, even years later. it has a great plot, a fantastic idea, an interesting characterization of Viper, and I really liked how Viper's presence has changed things so far. even if it's never finished, it's still one of my fav fics.
I'm on ao3 under stardust_studio, used to have a ffnet account, idk what happened to it.

Hey, there! Hope you're hanging in there. I find that you are one of the best author I've encountered in the realm of fanfiction. I've read some of ur stories, most of them are your Harry Potter x LOTR crossover fics. Absolute masterpieces, all of then, I'm telling you! What I'm really saying is, I really enjoy your works, and I hope you won't give up on writing, because I, and many other I believe, are waiting for your comeback enthusiasticly!

The Adventure tag can always, and I mean ALWAYS be assumed with a LOTR crossover. You should've tagged this as hurt/comfort in it's place. That's far more important for readers to know than something we all take for granted. More telling of what your story will do.

The idea is good but the execution is quite poor, I don’t think this portrays Harry correctly even after living for millennia he would be experienced than he comes off as. The world and writing style are also incredibly hard for me to follow you don’t really explain anything besides that Harry is old and an edge lord. Cool idea but overall not worth a read

I don’t really think that this is how Harry would act after living for so long. Living as long as he had and still not understanding people’s emotions. He kinda just acts like a teenager and I know that’s what you’re going for but he comes across as a petulant child sometimes.

wholeheartedly I hope of even after all this time you haven't given up on this story because I want to read more

I’m so glad I decided to reread this. And I’m even more glad that you’ve moved over to AO3 for the rewrite, I never would have seen it otherwise

I have one word for this ff and that is shit. Viper the immortal is not even strong enough to save his own ass. How fucking useless this ff is

Loving it.

I don't know if you are still active, it's been 4 years since you updated, but if you are please, please, PLEASE do this for me: change the way Viper answers why he used the window to "doors are for people with no imagination." It is a quote by a character called Skulduggery Pleasant, and he is actually quite similar to Viper.

'Viper' should snap, and let all his history out at once.

'supine position' sounds like something fancy an elf would use for dirty pillow talk, frankly.

So you would never do that...

10 members-How could he say 11 maths Elrond

I hope you feel better skye.