Reviews for Star Gazing For Bats
justyourtypicalathlete chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
I so ship it
jasmine.n.underwood chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
Please continue this interesting story can't wait to see what happens next :P:P:):):D
abby chapter 5 . 8/8/2014
I love it please continue
Ravenmore45 chapter 4 . 7/19/2014
This story sucks. Fucking retard.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/19/2013
please write more
Don't-Heichou-Me-Brat chapter 5 . 9/19/2013
hello! I've read through your story and would love to offer my assistance as a beta reader! message me if you wanna know more!
Matthy chapter 3 . 9/12/2013
Im sorry but I cannot keep on are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes and my eyes and braint dont want to work more if this means all the chapters are going to be writen like !
Ravenmore45 chapter 5 . 9/13/2013
Please don't make Emily a damsel in distress! I hate that! It's so cliche!
Mortalsapien chapter 4 . 9/13/2013
Nice new chapter..
I liked but ,I think it was little OOC for Bruce to say that to Emily ,that she owe him..

But its not Bruce/Batman to ask returns in his help.. ... At least I always thought that .

Keep Writing...
highlander348 chapter 5 . 9/12/2013
She almost kissed Batman! It's not fair! :(
Mortalsapien chapter 3 . 9/12/2013
Nice start ! of story..my frnd...
specificly Emiy and Bruce first meeting was quite unique in Cementry... nice..

Bruce offering Emily space in Manor was good move... to keep her safe and since Emily does'nt have family...

But I would suggest strongly that do not make Emily and Bruce fall for each other too fast... Its not too good for their relationship...
(Take things little slow and let them grow habitual of their company...)
Then they could love each other ...

However, I think unmasking Batman now...is not correct time for it.. Bruce/Emily does'nt even know each other fully...
It would be too soon...

May be later in time as Emily already suspecting...She will discover it by her own..

Keep writing..
WinterRain36 chapter 3 . 9/11/2013
when emily finally unmasks batman can she help him? pretty please!
highlander348 chapter 3 . 9/11/2013
Bruce will have a hard time sneaking out at night with Emily there! (laughing)

I hope she helps Batman though. That crime lord is probably after Batman to. Who will watch over him?
highlander348 chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
Can she still unmask Batman soon? Please? :)
highlander348 chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
A good start! Just some spelling errors here and there. I wonder what Emily will see throught her telescope? Here is a suggestion for you which I hope you like! Could she see Batman taking off his mask? She could then blackmail him into letting her help him! Batman won't like it but he won't have much of a choice now. (lol) What do you think? :)

Cheers!