|Reviews for Distorted Familiar|
| narutoDkurosaki chapter 5 . 2/15
I have read many crossovers in this fandom of familiar of zero and while all of them have some character from a popular anime like naruto or fate stay night while they are good they have no plot just the character following the anime episodes but your fic has a plot even if the chapters are around 1K I hope that you would update soon because 4 months have passed since your update
| Sakurada Kiritsugu chapter 5 . 1/4
Oh shit, Arceus woke up too!?
Will there be the appearence of Darkrai and Creselia too? They are also technically Arceus's children.
| irnzenmonk chapter 5 . 11/26/2013
i like this story ne
| The Writer Of Fate chapter 5 . 11/10/2013
You need to slow down. Your story is rushed and lacks proper development.
| ThePizziaMan chapter 5 . 10/26/2013
Can't wait for the next chapter:)
| BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 5 . 10/4/2013
This looks really promising!
| Creeves59 chapter 5 . 10/1/2013
It's good. X-) More realistic than I thought, but still better than anything I could of imagined. Can't to see what happens next. :-)
| Heika chapter 5 . 9/30/2013
GALAXY Giratina tome.
Who wrote it? Doubtful anyone would eb named GALAXY especially in all caps.
Will Gira think of Louise as a grandaughter? Brimir weilded a fraction of his/its power and thus could be considered Gira's son. I think it would be a nice addition to the Giratina tome.
the smell of terror when the humans saw him. It was just wonderful.'
How do they know?
Justice? Who has awoken?
| MetalKing1417 chapter 5 . 9/30/2013
Oh the "All shall be brought to justice" line reminds me of something.
| The DarkEnd Dragon chapter 5 . 9/30/2013
Are the Mysterious Beings Arceus and his twins Palkia and Dialga?
| creeves59 chapter 4 . 9/27/2013
I like where this is going. XD Please continue.
| MetalKing1417 chapter 4 . 9/28/2013
This story reminds me of a snip on spacebattles where Louise also summoned Giratina (all the other students also summoned Pokémon too).
Food for thought- in the context of Arceus' creations, Giratina seems to be the anti- Anti time, anti space, anti good(?). Furthermore, based on the impression various cannons give us, it is also obsessed with keeping order (Attacking Cyrus when he tried destroying the universe, Attacking Dialga because of its fight with Palkia).
What personality are you going to give Giratina in the future and his true motivations? Generic Demonic tempter? Ambitious individual who wished to expand his role beyond what was given to him? Overzellous enforcer?
| PEJP Bengtzone V2 chapter 4 . 9/28/2013
Brimir was an Annunaki-like former Messiah.
| Argorok chapter 4 . 9/27/2013
Great story so far, please keep up the good work.
| formerlyarandomreviewer chapter 4 . 9/26/2013
Arceus the Original One
Dialga, Palkia, and Giratina the Universe Molders. Uxie, Azelf, and Mespirit the Life Molders
Mew the First Life
Kyogre, Groudon, Rayquaza, Regigigas, Regirock, Regice, and Registeel the World Shapers
Ho-oh, Lugia, Reshiram, Kyurem, and Zekrom the Deities
Entei, Suicune, Raikou, Moltres, Articuno, Zapdos, Tornadus, Thundurus, Landorus, Heatran the Greater Spirits
Celebi, Shaymin, Manaphy, Cobalion, Virizion, Terrakion, and Keldeo the Guardian Spirits
Victini, Jirachi, Latias, Latios, Cresselia, Darkrai, and Melloetta the Lesser Spirits
Unown and Missingno the Enigmas
All things considered she certainly could have done worse on the Divinity Scale for her summoning.