Reviews for Overheard
Guest chapter 23 . 9/27
Loved it, just wish for a Sequel ;)
Guest chapter 20 . 9/27
I Love Draco at the Dursleys
Purple unicorn chapter 23 . 8/12/2017
Amazing. Just amazing.
Nakedcat chapter 8 . 8/2/2017
Hey! I quite like your story, and I think your writing style is interesting!
I have a few things to say about it though. I feel like the story is moving along too fast (Harry's discovery of his feelings, his confessions, etc). It also lacks a little dialogue, somehow.
I feel like this is just a few little steps away from being the great story it could be (it's only my opinion, though), so keep going, keep writing what you like, how you like it. It can only improve.
Of course, if you don't agree with my advice, it's ok, It's just a few suggestions.
Thanks for reading this review!
One reader chapter 21 . 6/14/2017
To all those who have written in bold. Why do you write in bold? I can understand an Author note, but not the story itself. Think about it like this, would you write something in bold for an assessment you hand to your teacher, no. So why fan fiction? I'm depply sorry, I did try and read though it, but I can't when it feels as if the whole story is screaming at me. I wish you luck.
Bele chapter 23 . 6/13/2017
so. did like three people write this story? the beginning was very serious and emotional and introspective, then suddenly the crazy chapter with Easter and Voldy was writer Two and then the rest was just pure hilarity from writer number three... that middle bit had thrown me a lot, but I'm happy to have read through the endDraco and the Dursley's eas just too funny. Thanks for writing this story!
Scrappy2017 chapter 23 . 5/14/2017
I really love this story. There were so many times were I was actually laughing out loud. And when Draco almost died, I had to pause for a moment because I was crying. So very glad you didn't kill him off. I thank you for writing this, it was a very wonderful story.
SaberAureum chapter 9 . 12/18/2016
Lol, Draco is totally the bottom in this fic.
Sawada Miyuki chapter 22 . 8/1/2016
I have never laughed this hard it was a really funny chapter
Ruby chapter 16 . 1/4/2016
... Wow...
It started out pretty okay and I was really starting to like it! However, I noticed as I read on that there were way too many inconsistencies happening and chapters 13-15 basically had me reeling in the absurdities going through my mind at what could possibly happen when Harry would make it to the Manor for Christmas ...
Chapter 16 just tipped the ship overboard on 'wtf just happened' and 'am I still reading the same story here?'. Shit just hits the fan and I feel like this odd chapter doesn't even correlate well with the story!
What I'm trying to say is ... It's ridiculous!
I feel like you built the story up so well and decided to ruin it half way through ...
I'm sure there are others that may enjoy this type of plot (judging my some of the reviews) but it's too incredulous for me. Everything was great until chapter 13 or so and even then I was cringing and continued onto chapter 16 which totally broke the story in half.
I'm sure you've improved since then and you're probably a great writer but this just wasn't for me.

I also wanted to make this a heads up for all those Drarry lovers out there who might be contemplating on reading this fic. Chapter 16 will blow your mind.
YaoiKitten666 chapter 23 . 10/10/2015
I have never loved a fanfiction more than I love this one. Although I'm like...way late in reading this (Literally, sorry I was only like...4 when it was finished) I love it so much. At chapter 16 I was slightly boiling with mixed emotions of confused hatred and shock (until the next chapter). But by far, my favorite thing/s are that you wrote t so well for this story...and 'Fellyfone' and 'Light bobs' (I may be calling them that in the future. I do wish *more* had happened, but I'm content as all hell with this.
Tonsoffandoms chapter 23 . 7/8/2015
Tbh I never knew that I needed a curious Draco Malfoy until I read this fic! He was so entertaining when he was expressing interest in muggle things! I also liked the connection that Harry and Draco had; how much they cared for each other. Thank you for the amazing story!
Babs707PertemisDrarry chapter 11 . 3/31/2014
Omg this is my favourite chapter sofa ruts soooo cute. I love the sweetness of it all and when dracofell asleep and the last sentence I squealed so bad! :) I love this story and will read it all because it's brilliant it is a very good read you have many brilliant ideas! I lied very much seeing Draco happy and at ease in this part even if it wasn't I very much detail it was amazing that you changed his character so lvh without making it seem fake like most tend to turn out so very well done you are an amazing writer!
DRARRYLOVER3 chapter 23 . 9/15/2013
AAAAAWWWWWWWWW YAY CUTE ENDING :3
milly.braithwaite chapter 23 . 8/28/2013
Oh my God!
I hope you are still using fanfiction, as I am replying 11 years too late! However I was 7 when you wrote 'Overheard', so I was rather late in discovering...don't get me wrong, I think of JK as a God, but your story, amazing, I wish JK had used your version, I was crying in laughter at Aunt Marge's visit, I cried when I realised what Draco's final birthday present was to Harry...Draco, was incredibly perfect, he always is, but no one else gets him that perfect, I loved it!
If you haven't, please please please make a sequel! If it wasn't less than 3 hours till my alarm, I would begin reading another of your stories now, however I felt I had to tell you how perfect this was! This absolutely made my night...absolutely astounding, if I weren't myself, poorer than the Weasley's, I would certainly pay you to be able to read that again, Draco being willing to die for Harry...so sweet, so perfect...be proud for the rest of eternity for writing this story!
I have made 6 typos so far, so need sleep, so I won't spend my remaining 2 hours, 43 mins of sleep telling you every detail of what I loved, it was perfect! Ron walking in...Molly hugging Draco...I loved it all! As soon as I can I will read every Harry Potter related story you have done, and maybe others (if there are any) but Harry Draco slash has my heart really, I haven't read any anywhere near as perfect as yours, I could see everything!

It really was amazing, if I can review again, I shall, if not, my name on here is , I am unsure how to email on here, but I will try and learn to email you to say exactly everything I loved about your story, the only thing I hated was that it ended!...much love!...xxx
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