Reviews for The Elder's Fables |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Aspen, I loved this series a great deal! Your writing is beautiful Please, don't ever stop! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, Megatron. I had my suspicions when I read "tall, grim mech" and later "said gruffly", and of course the setting is the mines of Kaon, so yeah. These are cool little stories... I like how you're introducing each story with the frame narrative of the Elder and the younglings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank-you Old One, for all the tales and stories. They are good lessons, entertaining, wise and full of truth. Hugs to the younglings and if you see Aspen...a big one! |
![]() ![]() Simply Beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet! I especially liked the tackling scene. I learned early on in life that the only way to even the playing field with the bigger boys was to throw them off at the start. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank-you Aspen! It is lovely. I like the change from a ball to the contest grounds. Quite my favorite I think! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The garden party is very sweet. :) As is the retelling of the friendship story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoops, sorry about the previous review...anyways, great job on the chapter! Can't wait for the next update! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() THAT SECOND ONE IS THE STORY OF DAMON AND PYTHIAS! So cool! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your stories prove that good tales, fables and proverbs are universal. All you need do is change out the species! How about a story about Cinderflint? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha, well everyone knows that in case of ghosties, or ghoulies, or long legity beasties, or things that go boom in the night it is best to be safely near a large Cybertronian. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Could you do one perhaps something with Jazz and Prowl? |
![]() ![]() Thank You! D I couldn't help but smile when I saw this chapter! You made my day! You did an excellent job on the story, it couldn't be told any better than you have told the story here. You are writing beautiful stories, do keep up the good work. I enjoy seeing that you are having fun writing. :) A.H. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chap! sometimes I wonder if we underestimate the smartness of children? Please update soon! |