|Reviews for Friends Don't Let Friends Freeze!|
| B3GIN chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Chi, I love this. ;w; There are so many times where I've attempted reading one shots that try to delve into this area of near-romance-but-still-not-there-but-definitely-fo rming-ness and simply felt awkward. Heck, even published authors have caused me to cringe while attempting this kind of "fluff." But I can happily say I never felt uncomfortable while reading your story. It just seemed... so natural, which is definitely something you capture spectacularly in all your writings. Allen wasn't acting oddly or too lovey dovey as he often is portrayed as in oneshots like this. He was Allen! The complex and confused boy from the series we love!
And Kiraaaaaa al;skdfjkdfj. I love her so, Chi. :') I'm glad you didn't have her notice the discomfort Allen felt when she mentioned the moon- -so often it becomes difficult for writers to separate the fact that there is miscommunication between people, especially at the start of relationships. Others would've been tempted to have their character notice Allen's fear and comfort him immediately, but I'm really glad you didn't take that route. And even after loving someone for a long time, there are still instances where you never realize you inadvertently made them recall something unpleasant.
The way they tease each other is great too. :'D Kira's awesome. Excellent, excellent job, Chi. 3