Reviews for Surprise visitor
Roses 4 Life chapter 10 . 4/28/2014
You ma'am, are an amazing author!
iJapan chapter 10 . 12/8/2013
That's it. I cried. I fucking cried.

I need a tissue.

I won't say how much I loved this because if I did it would probably take up a whole page of reviews.

Can I just like, worship this? I'm going to anyway.


And yes. I want these two. In my bed. Mwahaha.

Thank you again for writing this amazing story! :'3
Kotori Yui chapter 9 . 11/25/2013
*O* Incest is the best! I loved this chap, so sweet and sexy! And maybe it's just me but... why does I have the feeling that you will turn them into sekes? x)
Mini-Moffie13 chapter 9 . 11/24/2013
*whispers* don't tell the whole world of my perverse love of Grantz incest XD alright half the world already knows so why bother hiding it XD
awesome chapter! Glad it isn't over yet :)
iJapan chapter 9 . 11/24/2013


*Hastily goes to grab a tissue and quickly wipes away the nosebleeding splattered on my computer*

That... was beautiful.
Kotori Yui chapter 8 . 11/22/2013
You see what i always told you? *O* Incest is the best thing ever! I absolutely love this fic, its so hot and erotic!
And how could you leave all your readers with that last speech? *sighs* thank God its almost Sunday : )
I will be waiting to read more delicious smut ;D
Mini-Moffie13 chapter 8 . 11/19/2013
Awwwwwww it was smut but still kind of fluffy in a way! I need moreeeeeee! *squee*
Mini-Moffie13 chapter 7 . 11/19/2013
Oohhhhh I need to read the next chapter RIGHT NOW! :D
Mini-Moffie13 chapter 6 . 11/19/2013
OOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH I am so glad I finally have a moment to catch up on this! This chapter was brilliant! The answers are finally slipping in to place!
iJapan chapter 8 . 11/17/2013
... You are evil. Evil, evil, evil for ending it RIGHT THERE xD

Gahhh... I still freaking LOVE this story. Szayel dropped the bomb on Yylfordt alright... things are going to be quite interesting indeed... hmmm.

(Have I mentioned you're evil?)
fuusunshine chapter 7 . 11/10/2013
Neeeeigh! Bahahaha. How could Grimmjow Say whore-us with a straight face?
iJapan chapter 7 . 11/10/2013
Ok, first thing's first: you keep saying it's all my fault... I don't see what the problem is *smiles sweetly* ... I'm just a simple reader... *grins* xD Oh God I'm really looking forward to what's coming up xD You're still very evil, don't forget that.

Now then, the chapter...

I loved it. The humour was fantastic and had me giggling into my pillow, as well as the "whore-us" (you know of what I speak)... I'm still loving Lumina and Verona in this, too xD

Loving the continued character development as well... and I'm glad Szayel accepted Yylfordt the way he did... it makes me happy there's some mutual love going on here :D I'm waiting with bated breath for the next chapter, I really am xD ... the suspense is killing me xD
Kotori Yui chapter 6 . 11/4/2013
O/O It was so f*cking hot ! I LOVE SM the most! I just didn't know you could write in such a way xO I admire you even more! I loved this chap ! And did Szayel really find out who it is his 'lover'? Móóó, I will be waiting impatiently till next Sunday X3
Kotori Yui chapter 5 . 11/4/2013
** that's why I love SM erotic stuff! So f*cking hot damn it! Plus the incest thing... WOW I'm going to hell but I hope I can read this kind of stuff there haha
fuusunshine chapter 6 . 11/3/2013
You warned me.
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