|Reviews for Light and Darkness|
| PokeCJG chapter 11 . 2/12
Everyone likes a bit of electro torture, right?
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| ExDraco chapter 11 . 2/11
Whoops... Looks like I'm late for reviewing this chapter... Well, I was kinda disappointed no OCs were introduced, but I guess this counts as a great suspense builder for the future chapters. I guess I don't mind waiting until the next chapter to see the OCs introduced!
| Lightdrago chapter 1 . 2/11
Amazing. Simple Amazing.
| Dustchu chapter 11 . 2/8
Another awesome chapter well done my friend :) Awesome.
I loved it! :D DEMONS! :D and ANGELS! :D Shippity
Good work again man, keep it up! :D
I cannot wait till the next chapter.
| KrazyKoldKyurem613 chapter 11 . 2/7
oh man! first a fat scooter fuckhead and now a seductive slut...
| trynten.gonzalez chapter 11 . 2/7
Noo cliff hanger
| Coolx32 chapter 8 . 2/1
I'm enjoying this story so far! I was hesitant at first two chapters, but it managed to keep my attention throughout and really got me invested as it went on.
I just want to say that 'orbs' is not really the best word to replace 'eyes'. It's just something that bugs me a little. Makes it feel like it's referring to the entire eyeball rather than than just the iris. It's just bleh to me.
| Arcanemaster2324 chapter 8 . 1/23
Very nicely written, and well done. It's clear that you're putting a lot of time and effort into this story, and I can't wait for the next update. -Arcane
| trynten.gonzalez chapter 10 . 1/16
I will rewrite oc first chance I get
| ExDraco chapter 10 . 1/16
After hearing Lutra... I kinda regret giving you that advice. I'm sorry, and I'll find a way to correct things like... kidnap Lutra for a chapter or two?
| Dustchu chapter 9 . 12/8/2013
Nice short my friend :)
and awesome work on this buddy! :d this was an awesome read! :D
keep it up!
| trynten.gonzalez chapter 9 . 12/8/2013
Well this was better but i had no idea what was going on. Gave me a good laugh thank you SD.
| PokeCJG chapter 8 . 12/3/2013
Ohohooooo! This was one gory chapter! Might wanna bump the rating up to an M, though. Especially if Serpent meets the Lust sin!
| KrazyKoldKyurem613 chapter 8 . 12/1/2013
| Dustchu chapter 8 . 12/1/2013
Woohooo! :D nice chapter and awesome work my friend! :D
Man Serpent, poor guy. I feel your pain brutha! *Hugs*
Freakin awesome work again my friend! :D
Can't wait until the next chapter! :D