He's so mysterious. And has something happened with Bella that made her so withdrawn?

I love these characters and love how Bella's thoughts of the past blend into her feelings about Charlie and Edward in your story! I can picture his hair and motions with your words, you paint such a song picture! Enjoying every phrase and turn.

She's so confused, kinda sad and adorable

They are the sweetest

She just can't resist him

Loved it, thanks for sharing this fic

Edward is so adorable, just making himself at home. What a charmer

I love this Bella!

That was so funny!

She seems so awkward, love it

So I got to this story cuz I was stocking excon and needed more, finished it n a night and LOVED it, will now me moving to another one of ur stories:-D

So I floated over here from one of your other stories and the almost, but not quite stream of consciousness narrative is cooking here too. I'm only a few chapters in and not quite knowing if I like being in Bella's head yet, but I trust. I was squicked out by the story description when I first saw it when you started writing it, but again, trust this will work.

the frikin mouse part was GREAT, toooooo funny!

So crazy, but real. I love it.

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