Reviews for Malicious
Guest chapter 12 . 4/30/2014
Wow, your stories will never let the characters have a break will ya? Although great story! Can't wait 'till you make another one!
Man chapter 12 . 10/26/2013
Bloom was Mal's daughter when she wasn't a virus. That's my guess.
Scruff the Rat chapter 12 . 10/26/2013
Nice job on the story! I've seen the improvements you're making as a writer, by the way, and they're coming along swimmingly. Although, now I have to ask: who is Bloom? What do Mal and Tor intend to do next? And what of Turbo, now that he's imprisoned?

So many questions, so much need for a sequel...
Lady Shadow92 chapter 12 . 10/26/2013
oh wow is it over I hope not this story was amazing can't wait to read more
Lady Shadow92 chapter 11 . 10/26/2013
wow that was amazing but I wonder who mal was talking about I mean who is bloom? great chapter can't wait to read more
Lady Shadow92 chapter 10 . 10/25/2013
wow that was another cool chapter great job update soon
Guest chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
Okay, the constant use of exclamation points outside of what the characters are actually saying is getting kind of annoying. It feels like I'm reading a story filled with nonstop shouting. If an exclamation point's not at the end of a character's statement or a sound effect, then it shouldn't be there at all.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/20/2013

Scruff the Rat chapter 9 . 10/22/2013

Do not mess with the Nicelanders...or Candlehead for that matter!
Lady Shadow92 chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
oh wow that fight was intense great job I want more this is just awesome
Scruff the Rat chapter 8 . 10/22/2013
Excuse me while I do a spit-take.

First Candy turns on Mal and Tor...then Tor saves Vanellope...then reduces Turbo to his original self...and now not only does Tor have a true form...he's Mal's HUSBAND!

Any more crazy twists you'd like to add? XD
Lady Shadow92 chapter 8 . 10/21/2013
okay did not see that coming I did see king candy back stab mal and I thought vanellope was going to die or felix but there at the end of turbo being himself again and that tor was mal's husband those were shockers. excellent job update soon
Lady Shadow92 chapter 7 . 10/20/2013
wow that was an epic chapter please update soon I have to know if they defeat mel and king candy
Scruff the Rat chapter 6 . 10/19/2013
Oh sugar honey iced tea indeed...How in the world are they going to get out of THIS?! O_o
Lady Shadow92 chapter 6 . 10/16/2013
oh no this is terrible no can get into their games felix can't use his hammer and gene is a monster update soon this is epic
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