crying shaking throwing up what a GOOD FIC

Aaaah, back for another reread. I went back in the comment section to check how long it has been since I last read this: 2019!

The Live Action gave me all the One Piece feels again, so naturally I once again gravitated towards all my favourite fics. Like when a fox falls is very, very high on that list.

Thanks so much for writing and sharing

huh. so in this world, Luffy took Ace's role, the one with a father whose shadow hangs over his head, feared and thus placing a target on him

My children! T-T
I love them all so much, and you wrote them so well!
Thanks for writing :]

Im so heartbroken by this

I love the way u write for real, its so smooth, giving the right jnformation and still succeeding in delivering the good amount of emotion. im truly saddened, hopeful and in love with the characters.

hope ur doing well, kudos

There's something so fierce and sincere at the very core of your writing, that i can't help but ache and smile and cry a little bit.

I was curious when i clicked on this fic and by the second chapter, i thought with glee "This is it. This is what I yearned to read all along." Because through the politics, the violence, its the gritty apartment that sits between fate and a boy with a solar system of misfits that make me believe and cheer.

I think you captured the straw hats at their very essence, despite their difference in age (and the fact that Chopper is taller than Nami?), it doesn't change anything that Zoro is a teenager because once he said "Enough". They listened. And while there are tid bits and parallels that make the readers smile just so in a "AH HA I see what you did there moment!".

Its original and heart achingly sad at times, and i am so happy to've discovered your piece of writing. Its somehow poetic in a reminiscent way and so straight foward and doesn't linger awkwardly at all.

I just love it.

Thank you thank you thank you! I can’t express my appreciation enough for this update. I don’t care how long it takes for another update just please hang in there and finish this story. It is one of my favorites of all time! The sheer emotion you are able to express in your writing is astonishing. I love it. Can’t wait for the next installment!

Pls update

"Of course," She hears herself say. "Leave the rest to us."

And her promise is as fierce as a declaration of war, as bright as fire that burned a five-dotted flag against a blue sky.

I literally got chills at reading this part and Im at work and its 3:42pm here wow

I love the concept btw and this line slays me:sandstorm blow away and saying stay and wait; Zoro, in the jungles, before a god that could destroy them all yet standing his ground with the belief of fight and follow; Zoro, always, half a step behind his captain and looking in the same direction.

A Lovely Story, one that touch the deepest part of my heart, really.

I don't know if you will continue this story or not, but as far as this story had come from the first chapter to the tenth, its been a wonderful story and though it may not have an actual ending, it was still a good story
One that kinda broke my heart from the angst and stitched it back together with its warmth.

Many readers are hoping 4 you to continue, of course but no pressure 'kay?
We'll always be waiting

I started this years ago when it was only like 4 or 5 chapters long and loved every second of it.. now I finally got around to reading what’s been added since and I can’t get enough of it. I’m so happy that they’re all together and that their love of each other transcends their ages and roles. It’s such a lovely story. It would still be awesome if they remembered. Maybe all of them but Luffy? (Mind you I love that Having memories of a pst life isn’t why they got together .. but I would love to see them understand once they’re all together? Idk my mind is going wild thinking of what else could happen)

I’ve always loved you OP stories you truly know these characters and I’m so happy to read anything you write.

Oh, the phrases that send goosebumps across my body. I am seriously so invested in this now.

Is always good to read your stuff. I quite agree, this is indeed the soul of One Piece-strength from simple depth.

Every time I read this it never fails to make me Feel Things

Ace and Sabo remembered, didn't they? Fuck is Sabo somehow still alive then? And I know this is regular world but I can't help but think that Sunny can somehow turn into a ship or mecha or something because Franky is just Like That