Reviews for Just Des(s)erts
quantumsilver chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Interesting. Cerebral. Antiperistalsis, eh? Well you had me there. ;)
Delwin chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
My favorite part of this remains the back story on the Alfarians - just utterly wonderful. In a few sentences, we get a vivid and textured glimpse into an entire, quirky Delta Quadrant culture - as well as more insight than anyone might want into the ingredients used in Neelix's cooking.
And that Corellian tart with its "lashings of sauce"...
I love the intricate, understated details of this one. And that final line (which I absolutely did not see coming) - perfect!
CrlkSeasons chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
I also enjoy reading stories set during quiet moments on the ship, and more Captain Proton is always welcome.
A nice teaser at the end, given the title and the last line, I expect more stomach upheavals to follow.
A cute story, fun to read.
The Cheshire Cheese chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
Good story! The writing was definitely what I'd call "quality fanfiction." I could picture this in a short-story book for "Star Trek." I like reading about every-day happenings for the Voyager crew, and it was cool to see Tom introduce Harry and the twins to Captain Proton.

The hoof shavings were fantastic. And poor, poor Grimes.